This story looks like it will be extremely interesting! I'm putting it into my favorites to keep updates when you send in the next chapter. Which I look forward to very much!!!
I sometimes like to see this commonly used storyline written by different writers as each have their own take on what could happen. What you've posted so far is interesting. Kagome a traitor?!? I'm interested to see how she'll make Midoriko change her mind that all youkai, as I prefer to call them due to the cultural differences in meaning, should be extinquished or vanquished.
Kagome has had many different interactions with youkai and with the humans in this time period. I'm sure that Midoriko must know Kagome is of the future and therefore I think she's in for a lesson in racial decrimination from Kagome who treats everyone the same unless proven otherwise. I guess being shattered within the shards of the jewel, Midoriko must not have had a chance to learn of her desendents love for all things living.
Please do continue and give yourself a break when you slip into chat speak. I'm totally illiterate to alot of it, but until you get into a routine of writing again, don't sweat it. You didn't do all that bad anyway. Good luck. I'll be looking back in to see how this goes. JEN
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