Very much enjoyed this chapter, and was relieved to get such a speedy update. I was ACTUALLY chewing my nails. Ick. I'm overly eager to see what will hapen when Sesshomaru and Kagome meet. I'm hoping we wont have to wait long at all in order to see them together again. I'm wondering how Sesshomaru will respond to seeing Kagome again.... but I'm confused. Does he know she is alive yet, or no? I wasn't able to make that out in the story. Thanks.
Hey Lady O, sorry to be so abrupt last night, leaving such a wimpy review. I have no other excuse for it but that this story has really taken on a REAL life quality about it. Don't get me wrong, all of your fics are just so realistic but this, this one is just so compelling that I actually could feel the raw emotions of it. I was truly disturbed by what I read for a few hours afterward and PJ said that's why she can't read these types of fics.
I know, you sit there, and you look at what you write and probably think you just don't see how your stuff is that good but, I'm telling you, this hits the charts for realism. It's as likely a thing to happen today, what with all that's going on in our government. It's frightening really, to think that this can and has probably happened.
Anyway, the whole interaction between Yasha and Kagome was just so intense. I took Kagome's perspective and could actually believe how betrayed and angry she was feeling toward Yasha. I honestly think that if the Captain wasn't there we would have seen just who the better fighter was, and my bet would be on Kagome.
she didn't live all these years without being raped because those men took pity on her. He may be a man but she was trained by Maru and those skills coupled with her adrenaline flowing at max through her body, she could have very well put him down. My aunt, a small, thin barely 5 ft woman literally took down a 6 ft, 200 some pound man and threw him out of their tavern for messing around with her toddler. She made him a laughing stock from all who witnessed it. You don't mess around with Em.
I also can see how no one would expect to find Maru alive. Those who investigated the aftermath would have no reason to believe it possible that he could be alive after seeing such carnage. I, myself, had a hard time believing it could be possible that he was still alive after what you were decribing but there would only be two ways for that information to go and one was for him to be alive or that they actually caught someone, but if that had happened there would have been news of it.
So, he's living not too far from their base. I guess it's a blessing they're considered a bunch of misfit troublemakers. I really liked that it was Yasha that found him. That was definitely one of their gods stepping in and it's a good thing Yasha has Captain that so patient with his temperment.
I have to say that I can't wait for the reunion. I gather that Maru knows that she's alive and is patiently waiting for her to be properly prepared for seeing him. I do have to wonder though how Kagome can help with solidifying their case against Onigumo. But she was to be the girl's bridesmaid so, who knows? JEN
@_@ need. more. now. please.... Okay weirdness aside... DANG GIRL WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO KILL US ALL WITH ANTICIPATION?!?!?!? Lol I'm just kidding, but srsly, I wanna see Maru so keep it coming!!!
GAHHHHH!!! you are sooo mean. so much suspense! But its bloody brilliant
Daaaaaaaaammmmmmnnnn!! I didn't expect that one Oro! You booted me out to left field on that one. He survived the torture and everything? He has to be warped in a way after this though. You have me on the edge of my seat lady! This is truly one of the best stories from you!!!
Oh, how I thank God I waited to read this when my husband went to work. Lady O, you are one phenominal writer. You hit every single nerve inside me and ripped it in shreds. I've read only one other that was so descriptive and you are definitely just as talented. The visuals, as well as the verbal abuse, the psycological torture along with the physical...and he's alive!?!
My face is so hot from crying and you'll have to forgive me for not saying more, but this, for some reason has really made an impact on me and I have to just say, until the next update... JEN
AHHHHHHHHHHH OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *runs around screaming* I KNEW IT!!!! I KNEW HE WAS STILL ALIVE!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!But srsly.... those horrible things they did to him, i really hope he's still in one piece, and OMG OMG OMG OMG When do we see him?!?!?!?
Okay I'm going to go freak out silently now, I really hope you update soon because I will go downright CRAZY if i have to wait long!!!! Keep you the great work!!!
First of all let me get out this overwhelming, and uncharaceristic use to gush: I am such a fan of all of your fictions. You keep everyone so well in character, while giving them your own personal flair for each story. You plots are well thought and intricate. Each chapter leaves me craving the next.
This work, is no different from the others in that respect. Although each piece is very unique. Infact I dont think i've ever read anything remotely close to this fiction. I cant wait for more.
I really appreciate how in character every one is. Like I said before, you keep characters true, but at the same time, they fit the story... like the bubbly Kagome wouldnt fit in this fiction, but she's just as kagome would be given more maturity, and all of these experiences.
I'm so on the edge of my seat with this chapter... I get the feeling Maru has changed a lot. I'm also wondering why he hasnt tried to contact Kagome unless for some reason he doesnt know she's back, which I find hard to believe. You paint him as the kind of man who finds a way to be in the know. Its been seven years, so maybe he's moved on in his life and doesnt want to dredge up his or her past and possibly bring one or both of them more pain. And why isnt he around anymore, unless he's jumped off the grid for some reason?
Sooo many question I cant wait to have answered. Hope to enjoy another information filled update soon!
Ahh I hate cliff hangers but got I love this story I cant wait for the next installment.
O.M.G.
Bloody hell I was practically hanging off the edge of my seat as I reached the end of the chapter! Maru is ALIVE!!!
It breaks my heart to imagine what he might be like now... Broken and a shadow of the man he once was before? Is he physically changed? How will he interact with Kagome once they see each other again after seven long years?
I really really can't wait to read more! I'm your fan!
<excuse me while I hyperventilate...>
I just KNEW that had to be it, but you've fooled me before. Wow! You, m'dear, are made of awesome sauce, for taking a nebulous dream and turning it into a heart-stopping roller-coaster of a story.
<goes back to re-read last chapter again...>
Sprinks (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Aug 2010
i'm in love with this story!!!! <3<3<3
you've portrayed the characters so well! and written the scenes beautifully. THE CLIFFHANGER THAT SESSHOMARU'S ALIVE i was jumping up and down in my seat!!! KEEP WRITING THIS STORY PLEASEE!!!!! UPDATE ASAP! because i want to know what kagome's going to do now? and what will happen when they meet because i don't think it's going to be all lovey dovey, both of them have been scarred too badly for that too happen! :O
:D oh it's just gotten sooo juicy!
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