Oh my goodness . . . that was beautiful and heartbreaking and just . . . I'm not even sure how to put it into words. So tragic, but you did such a fantastic job writing it. Wonderful work

wow... i onyl stumbled upon this story because of Rikayu's awesome pic and i HAD to know what story was mentioned

So ethereal and beautiful!! Tragic love story, good enough to be it's own fairy tale!!

Just amazing and yet sad. Even though, it only a oneshot but I would like to maybe hear more chapters if you ever change your mind.

aaaaawwwww!!!!!!! that was, i cant even type any words to describe the feelings i got from reading this. i can only say that this is pure love and i really really really hope you continure this. great story and keep writing more :)

So beautiful, yet so tragic. Good job :)

wow. you writing always leaves me wantint more! i had to read it over agian beacuse i was thinking about it when i went to work. this was deffinalty a better vampire fic them most. i would love more, but idk what else you could add, even though i hate tragic endings, this ending seems fitting of the story. i love the part of the story where it describes how they feel in love. just wonderful!

: sniff, sniff: I love a good tragedy. You did so well with this. I love it. Someday I would love toa see a part two, though.

Huggles Miss Teak!

Well done! Certainly one of the better vampire Sesshoumaru stories I have read. I hung on every word until the end.

This was a really great oneshot, despite it being vampire-esque. I'm not much into vamps. lol

The only thing I can say is that what you wrote in is definitely NOT Old English. In fact, it's not even Middle English. What people commonly thing of as "Old English" (usually like what Shakespeare wrote) is just and oldER version of English, but not Old English. Basically, it's old-modern English if that makes any sense to you. Old English is what the Vikings and the Norms spoke when they began to conquer Europe. It's a very, very gutteral and gravelly language. (I'm an English major in college, plus an English freak. lol)

Great story nonetheless, as expected from MissTeak.

I truly enjoyed this one shot of yours!

You did very well indeed!

Thank You!

more please! ^^

CONTINUUEEEE

Wow. I love it! Especially since the story involved vampires. All your stories are great. You clearly showed me that you can write about.. pretty much anything. Lol. Good job on the research. O and thank you for writing such good story. I hope you plot bunny keeps coming up with more stories!

OMG this was so beautiful!  You truly have the magic touch when it comes to tragedy and angst - something I struggle with myself.  But while I may not write it so well, I can certainly recognize the greatness in others!

Amber

SAD BUT BEAUTIFUL!

OMGILOVEDIIIIIT!!!!  The descriptions, how Sesshoumaru has to fight with himself to not suck the life out of Kagome, and just how tragic the story was is just mind-blowing to me.  Thank you for writing such a wonderful oneshot!  And I can see all the little hints of your research too~  I love the reference to the witch and the sharp pins~  

But I think what I loved the most was how you connected the rose with blood!  The rose's beauty so fragile, like Kagome who is human and like a mirror that can break when dropped.  The deep crimson of blood, like the blood Sesshoumaru needs to drink to stay alive and the color his eyes turn when he's angry.  XD

Again, I love your writing and how you connect these little things together! 

OMGILOVEDIIIIIT!!!!  The descriptions, how Sesshoumaru has to fight with himself to not suck the life out of Kagome, and just how tragic the story was is just mind-blowing to me.  Thank you for writing such a wonderful oneshot!  And I can see all the little hints of your research too~  I love the reference to the witch and the sharp pins~  

But I think what I loved the most was how you connected the rose with blood!  The rose's beauty so fragile, like Kagome who is human and like a mirror that can break when dropped.  The deep crimson of blood, like the blood Sesshoumaru needs to drink to stay alive and the color his eyes turn when he's angry.  XD

Again, I love your writing and how you connect these little things together! 

*streaming tears holding a teddy bear plush* That was so incredibly tragic yet oh so romantic at the same time! T_T *blubbers again*

I loved the way you set the writing style to such a classy and elegant format to match perfectly with the setting of this dark, sultry tragedy. Unbelievably beautiful writing as always!