Wow, this is really good! It's really original and a really new aspect I haven't seen in other stories. I can't wait till Sesshy comes back!!!! Keep writing please!!! :D 
      
pauly (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Jun 2010 
Hi, your story seems to be very interesting, but I got confused with the first four paragraphs, because the first one doesn't fit with the other 3, but I'm sure that as the story develops everything will make sense.  Anyway I like your plot and I hope you update really soon. ;) 
      
You've got me thoroughly confused with those first 4 paragraphs.  The first paragraph seems to contradict the next 3.  Hopefully it will be explained in the next update. 
I don't think Sesshoumaru should have left.  He should have stuck around to give Kagome support in her mourning.  Even with his stoic personality, by his just being there, would have been a comfort to her.  It would have helped in bringing her closer to him. 
      
So emotional[da good way] and ... pure-awesomeness...Can't really explain it!! ^^ 
it's one of my fav'z now xD 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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