For a first time smut.... That was SUPERB.
I must say that as I havent read the other stories with the courtesan & the demon lord because it seemed that for some reason in those stories the courtesan,Tayu,killed herself in front of Sessh & I thoufht it sad so I didn't read it. So,I'm a bit ocnfused if this Sessh in this story was really Lord Sessh still alive & still a demon,had met Kagome & realized that she was the reincarnated Tayu & after all those years he'd realized why she cried & killed herself.So upon meeting her this time,he wanted her to have the life she'd been denied in her previous life as Tayu,who was so sad that she'd killed herself.
????I don't know if it's true but,its just one way I'd interpreted how the other stories might have been.I guess I'll have to read them to know but I'm a bit afraid.
Grats! (claps hands in applause) It sounds like you did some research on the history of courtesans and their customs during that particular period. I appreciate well done, romantic fiction that is not presented in an overly graphic way, as well as refraining from the usage of too many 'four letter words'. You put it all together in a well done piece of romantic/erotic fiction, which so happen to be under the category 'lemon'.
It was indeed enjoyable. Written very well.
I plead the 5th on the 4th...the only night I had to myself to finally read this. Holy crap Missy...smutfest!!! Can you say nominate?
hola (Chapter 3) - Thu 01 Jul 2010
goodness me... i.. um, i.... *ahem* that was pretty imaginative, and intense. it was, uh... *grabs paper fan* i loved it. i think you're being INCREDIBLY modest when you say smut and lemons arent your forte, cos giiirrrrllll... damn. ^^
This was very good. So romantic, tender and wild at the same time. :)
RayRay (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Jun 2010
i'm not logged in right now lol. But i must say I LOVED this chapter and the ending and it was all just so perfect...and smutty might I add--which I also loooooved! You're writing and creativeness is amazing, as always my dear. I, too, loved the hair scene, it was so intimate and just perfect. I enjoyed each chapter but never got to review them from being so busy so I just wanted you to know that I really loved the entire thing. Much love to you my dear. Miss you!
Ice water...there's got to be some around here somewhere...I hope...<fans self>
That was so incredibly gorgeous; erotica taken to poetic heights. Watching Tayu Kagome fight so hard against what's happening to her, even when she realizes she can't win, is heartbreaking and touching at the same time. Hardness and delicacy blended into a breathless moment; that's the secret to really good love scenes. And you aced it. Bravo!
Wow, Miss Teak! That was amazing. You are an impressively skillful writer, to be able to infuse lemons with a combination of depth of emotion, poetic and historic imagery, and eroticism. This story is my favorite out of all the stories you have written, which I have loved and enjoyed so much.
ps~ I really enjoyed the part with the sword... blush...
Angela (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Jun 2010
woah all that smexy smut and the romantics ending! ^ ^ i loved it! ^ ^
Amy (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Jun 2010
UNBELIEVABLY EROTIC FANFICTION! IT FELT LIKE LIQUID SEX!
:Pouring water on my self combusting laptop: Ya happy now? You made the poor thing burst into flames... ;)
Great story and I look forward to reading more. have fun on the trip!
Lovely, MissTeak...absolutely lovely.
Banana (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Jun 2010
Ah this last part had me crying. In her shoes, I wouldn't want his tenderness either.
This is perfect but if you felt like writing more...I wouldn't object ;)
Ambra (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Jun 2010
Such a romantic lemon... Awww!
Madison (Chapter 1) - Sun 20 Jun 2010
K.
So, I've been sitting here, {I was reading this/writing its only kinky the first time} and I've been hot and bothered for like 10 minutes now. See I don't get why you doubt your smut skills hun, because this is well, hot. I have barely been on the computer lately, and frankly I'm exhausted, but this just brought the energy back into me.
The way it teases you and draws you in I love it. Of course it taunts you, and all, says you want this, but you can't have it, and now I despise it! Lmao. No I love it, but I just adore your way with words. Smut, romance, or angst, you just know how to create the perfect settings, and make it lovely, and my dirty mind cannot wait for you to continue this.
Seriously, I need more.
Wow definately HOT!!!! I loved every moment of the past and present. I cant wait to what happens next.
Oh my...I'm actually blushing. JEN
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