I loved this story! You're such a good writer, and you're new! I'm really impressed. I feel like I've read all the awesome stories on this site already, but I'm really looking forward to reading what you come up with. I think you're good enough to change my mind and give me a new favorite to read. Keep it up doll.
Damn that was HOT! I really enjoyed reading your story. It was a mixture of angst, romance and eroticism blended in one and was written so beautifully that I was able to read through it smoothly due to no punctuation, grammer or spelling problems. Don't get me wrong, I love reading a good lemon but finding lemons with the perfect blend of romance and eroticism is very limited. This is why I loved this story!
I hope that you will continue to write and share in your beautiful stories here on this site. Soon I hope... lol!
I noticed that this story was a one shot. Were you planning on doing a sequel?
Thanks for sharing this with us and I hope and look forward to reading many more from you soon!
ghost_youkai (Chapter 1) - Wed 26 May 2010
This story was unbelievable beautiful. Sesshoumaru was adorably sweet reassuring Kagome that she was beautiful in his eyes. I also love how the lemon following the ending wasn't cliche or corny. I hope that more stories will be posted from you in the future.
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 1) - Wed 26 May 2010
I absolutely LOVED the story! I hope you'll do a couple of sequels to it...like maybe a bit of a blurb about what he does to Inubaka and the claypot...btw, what happened to Miroku and Sango? I hope Inutrasha didn't hurt them.
I'd also LOVE to see Kagome's mom's reaction to seeing her daughter come hope the long way and happily mated and having a gigantic family...*snickers*
O_O hotdamn! that was freaking awesome! though i cant lie I would love to see what happens to inuyasha and kikyo >:3 as for this fic! i need you to enter this into my GM challenge which crap i still gotta make a banner for but i will do it :3 this was awesomesauce!
This, was hot. And beautifully written. I do hope you'll write more (of this, or of anything else :)
Well, my goodness. That was incredible! What wonderful writing, and soooo fun to read. I always find it admirable when a writer can create something complete in just one chapter.
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