So.... yeah i see you have no reviews so i'm going to, that was good but very rushed it was just too rushed i think for me to relaly love it, i liked it but i thought that it needed more. You have her raped by naraku and she's then a sexual preditor in a way, cursing, and violent, while some of that would be warnted, it was just a bit too fast for it to really work well. i dunno. this has potential but needs more. - r0o 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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