wow...........all i can say is wow you totally capturd themood of the picture in your story!
Took my breath away. Oh my gosh, I think I've died. I can picture everything perfectly, and your descriptive, well-chosen words make the story flow so smoothly! Ahh! LOVE, LOVE, LOVED it! The subtle romance of the story without any actual romantic motions was genius, as was the plot and motives behind the characters. I can't believe how lovey-dovey I'm feeling at the moment! *cuddles herself* Well, actually, I can believe it. I think I've finally started getting used to how mindblowingly wonderful your writing is. Your stories just do that. Eh, oh well. *Cuddles herself again* Oh, and I really loved the intimacy the use of first-person made! It made the story so much more personal!
wellllllll that was soooooo romantic!!!!!! *fan girl sigh*
thank you for this wonderful one shot =) keep up the good work ^^
Ah, just as Sesshoumaru took Kagome's breath away w/just the site of him so does this story take the ground right from underneath our feet at how wonderful it is. You truely captured Miss janey-jane's artpiece in this fic, dear Teak-chan. c; You are just amazing beyond words ^-^
Aynessa (Chapter 1) - Sun 02 May 2010
Omg, this was fantastic. <3 I loved her illustration, and this story just works so perfectly for it. :D
Quiet Whisper (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 Apr 2010
aww that was so cute! I saw Janey-Jane's artworkd and had to check your story out, great job as always!
Gosh. Is there anything you CAN"T make beautiful, romantic, and heart-warming?! Can I just rub on your forehead so that, maybe, some of that brilliance in your head can rub off on me? lol Sounds creepy, I know, but holy crap, I loved this. Love. love. Love. love. LoVe!
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Oh this is so lovely and atmospheric! your writing does such a lovely job of painting a picture for the reader - I love all of the description. I like that you aknowledge the Kagome hasn't changed either - most people just focus on that Sess hasn't changed in all that time, but its nice that you have them ballancing each other out.
What a sweet, lovely story.
*Happy happy joy joy* Oh Miss Teak...you hit the nail right on the head with this one...it's just as beautiful as Janey's pic
Rikayu (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Apr 2010
Ah MissTeak! Another story that has captured me with pretty descriptions~~ I swear I could smell and see the sakura blossoms as I read your writing! Wonderful job!!
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