Darling, this story is....AMAZING! I am enjoying very much and am eager for more. Don't feel self-concious, it is very well done and I am very intrigued! Keep it up!
Wow, this is gorgeous- you write very well! I'm definitely adding this (and you) to my favorites, and keeping tabs on this story.
Despite what you said, I don't think this is an overused plot at all, and I look forward to seeing how you develope it! Again, awesome story, I can't wait to read more!
