well written story keep up the good work!

oh ho ho the plot thickens! i like this ^_^

yakuza - japanese mafia

wow thats gunna be nuts =x i cant wait!

Wonderful!

i likes this, i like that rin wasnt just some saint. and souta's a kid so yeah not bashing there.,

awe poor rin and shippo, but i like this over all :3 i already told you in chat about the spacing so i think your good there, and i cantwait tos ee what you do with this plunny :3