O_O ~! Well crap. let hope he doesn't get infected.
Yay!! Someone agrees with me about Kagome's feelings for Inuyasha also being a part of the reincarnation. The few times I mentioned this in a review, I had a couple writers firmly argue against it. I've always believed that Kikyou's strongest emotions carried over in her soul when it was reborn into Kagome. While her uniform is drying, see if you can't have some mischievous critter either steal it or one of those crazies can slobber on it. haha. I grew to hate that uniform while watching the anime. What idiot wears perfectly good school clothes to traipse around in the woods. Plus the skirt is so short, how can she keep from showing her panties all the time and keep her legs from getting all scratched up from the bushes and underbrush. I'm an old country girl who grew up on a farm near the mountains so I speak with experience. Besides she should dress for whatever period she is in. I have a feeling it's going to be more complicated than Sesshoumaru thinks to eliminate all the crazies.
Nice story :) i can't wait to see what happens :) it's been a while since i've read a "run into the forest and get found by Sesshomaru crying" story its a nice change from some of the other plots i've been reading :) i'm a bit confused about what happened to Kilala and Shippo though :)
Wow. Didn't see the character deaths coming. I alomost that shippou would be next. pheh. That got dark fast. I'm egar to see what happens now.
Wow!!! What a plot twist! I like it because it's different. I had to laugh at the reference to zombies at the beginning of the story. The rest of the chapter left me in shock and on the edge of my seat, tense and wondering what was going to happen next. Just please keep our two heros safe from any contamination.
That bear and then the others reminded me of those zombie films where they wanted to eat peoples brains. hahaha. I had to laugh. I hope she gets over her sniffles soon, because I'm sure Sesshoumaru has only so much patience for senseless tears and moping. At least she's beginning to see the differences between the two brothers.
well crap. sounds like they all went crazy. Can't wait to see what happens.
stars (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 Jan 2010
please updata
Very nice start! I can't wait to read more!
I liked the first chapter. I like the idea of her traveling with Sesshoumaru while she gets her head straight on her shoulders and gets rid of her rediculous emotions for Inuyasha. Sorry, but I've never had sympathy for her whining and tears over Inuyasha when she knew from the beginning she was wasting her emotions on him. I like how you've introduced Sesshoumaru's character. I believe him to be a very emotional and complex person. He just doesn't display his feelings as openly as those around him. Right now he's what Kagome needs, a quiet, neutral influence. As you build their feelings for each other, I hope you do it slowly. I believe love needs time to grow a solid foundation of friendship, trust and bonding.
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