omg! Aki I never laughed so hard! My poor stomach. I absolutely LOVED this. The Scottie beam me up part had me rolling! hahaha Please update soon, can't wait to see what going to happen next! :)
"His own wet muscle met hers and the battle for Middle Earth ensued."
"“Can I has sex now please?”"
“Why yes, you can has.”
"Sesshoumaru’s eyes widened in irritation as he rearranged the condom now encasing his wizard staff. Mounting her had been easy; riding her would be much more difficult."
“Oh no!” Kagome’s voice hitched at the second word of the phrase before another rock of his hips sent her to Jupiter in a slurpee cup.
“Beam me up, Scotty!”
So um, seriously girl. I scared my cats since I laughed so fucking hard. KUDOS!!!!!!
Miss.Undo (Chapter 16) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
love it!!!! please update. lol there both freaks how cute! ")
Krazy (Chapter 16) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
Bwaaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha....... xD that was awesome!!! Update soon!!!! I want her to be done with her exams!! :P lol
Saide (Chapter 16) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I can imagine Naraku having the most insane hard-on after reading what Sesshomaru read out him.
*rofl*
Sessygurl (Chapter 16) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
He definately reads alot. Wow! I wasnt expecting a quick update, excellent, excellent job!
Calophi (Chapter 16) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
*snrk* Writing bad porn is the best. I love the horrible metaphors & similes you used. Battle for Middle Earth? Pothead seeking munchies? XDXD I bet it was so much fun to write! I believe the one time I tried to write a bad one I likened an orgasm to machine-gun recoil. =D
Neva (Chapter 16) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
beam me up scottie!!! LOL
entertaining chapter
Aki, you're apparently on a mad-tripping sugar high. Nerds writing sex scenes are just too hilarious. I am sure he got all worked up about it too. Time to move in for the kill.
A protozoan life form the planet Suckface! What is that? OMG so effen funny. I bout Peed my pants! Thank you so much. please update soon.
Aki, when I saw that you had updated I was sooooo happy! I hope everything gets better for you at home. Awesome chapter and can't wait to read more from ya! :)
SS (Chapter 15) - Thu 15 Apr 2010
LOVEE ITTT =) I'm so glad you updated --- please continue updating =) I totally love it, can't stop laughing xD
LoL! This story is always a laugh. In a good way :)
Sessygurl (Chapter 15) - Thu 15 Apr 2010
I loved every moment of it. Horny much?...lol Anyways, how could Kouga even try to get her to study with him, then again thats why he is so stupid. I wonder what his come back will be? Anyways cant wait for the next installment. I hope you feel better soon, God Bless you!!
Neva (Chapter 15) - Thu 15 Apr 2010
ugh i loooooooove this sooooo much!!! definitely one of the most creative fics ive seen. I adore the format, and i must say this is definitely the first fic that i have EVER liked naraku's character! o.o
When he revealed that he was screwing inuyasha via postit i laughed so hard i spit out my tea onto my screen <3
Krazy (Chapter 15) - Thu 15 Apr 2010
Hahahahahaha.... hahahahahahahahahahaha........ hahahahahahahahahaha *stops laughing, takes deep breath, continues laughing* hahahahahahahahahahaha.......
update soon!!!!!!!! x3
sora-chan (Chapter 15) - Thu 15 Apr 2010
BY THE GODS!!!!!! AN UPDATE!!!!!
though I'm not one to be talking T_T
anyways, i hope everything is better with RL, God knows it can suck. But alas, an update I love you, I love this story, I love Sesshou in his argyle sweater-vest. KAGGO NEEDS TO WEAR HER SWEATER-VEST. I bet if she does, THAT would get Sesshou's attention lol.
she totally should , I think so.
"hey Sesshou-baby , wanna see what i'm wearing under my vest?" - Kagome
much love!
-sora
Brilliant, unique, innovative, genius, bloody addictive... I thought I'd just give the first chapter a quick read but I couldn't stop, I had to read it all, even though some things didn't make sense or were unfamiliar to me. I've googled more things from this one story than I have from anything else in months! If you'd written 100 chapters, I'd still be sitting here reading them all! This is hilarious! I love it! And, if I could, I'd chain you to your desk and computer until you finished it. But you'd probably end up getting visits from Naraku, who would appreciate the chains, as kinky as he seems to be...and that would slow the progress of the story. *sigh*
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