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That'll teach me to read funny lemons when I'm supposed to be studying! I burst out laughing and my mother poked her head in my study suspiciously and asked what I was doing :S
My favourite part was the last, of course. "Mommy was screaming loudly because the ramen was so hot but very good" indeed :P
A great reply to Kirai's challenge!
p.s. I seem to be stalking you with reviews lately but I promise I'm not doing it on purpose-I just happen to like your stories!
If all ramen was that spicy, I'd want some too. What a great story! I will never look at ramen the same way again.
pammy (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Nov 2009
I was actually eating ramen when I read this, and some of it almost ended up in my lap when I burst out laughing.
Some of the lines in this story are definitely destined for the "unforgetable fanfiction lines" discussion. Hilarious.
Wow!. That was sooo extremely cheesy yet I just couldn't look away. And I definitely won't ever be able to look at ramen the same way again. All the naughty imagery has given me a very satisfying lemony overload. My only question is... will there be a sequel? or a series involving different types of food? This has definitely made my day. LOL. Keep up the good work. :P
BluMystique (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Nov 2009
lmao forever. That was really hot and good!
Kirai (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Nov 2009
OMG!! I am so embarrassed, I burst out laughing at school reading this. Everyone just kind of stared at me. It was amazing. Hun, that was great. I LOVED IT!!! *pounces on Miss Teak as a thank you* KARMA!!
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