Yes, I understand her pride in her accomplishments regarding the school but sometimes pride has to be swallowed when you have to depend on others to lend a helping hand or wallet. Some anger, yes, because he did it without her permission or even talking it over with her, but I still think she went way overboard in the anger department. I think she's in the childish tantrum stage, so much so that she doesn't realize how much she's upsetting those around her and disrupting their lives. Also, she does not need to hide the fact that she's being stalked. That is nothing to ignore, nor think you can handle on your own, or to think they'll eventually lose interest and leave you alone. I know she does not want to appear weak and defenseless to Naraku but so far she has done nothing to stop him even if she could because I don't know how powerful you intend for her to be in the story. If she's to be an ordinary human, then she needs outside help for sure.
Saholia (Chapter 16) - Sat 21 Nov 2009
Awesome awesome awesome!!! I'm glad you updated--keep it up! xD
Oh wow! Poor Sesshoumaru and Kagome! I hope that Ranmaru's plan works! :D I think Ranmaru is becoming my favorite. =P
Saholia (Chapter 15) - Tue 17 Nov 2009
Noooo! I wento to click the next chapter link...but there was no more :( Awesome fic my dear! ^.^
I am sooo loving this story!! I cannot wait to read more. I love reading the reactions of Sesshoumaru. It's so funny, I find myself laughing.
I read this whole thing in one go - absolutely delightful!
I think Kagome is in the wrong by getting angry at him for helping. She should be grateful instead of being selfish in wanting to do everything herself. When you rely on donations, you don't bite the hand that helps. She owes him a big apology and he had better not be the one to apologize.
Mander B (Chapter 15) - Mon 16 Nov 2009
I want to dig in your head and see your imagination! I bet its wonderful! ( not literally, that would be very bad)
Jenna (Chapter 15) - Mon 16 Nov 2009
Ah!! i love it(:
i dont like it whenn they figghht!! they need to get over it and kiss and make up((:
thanks for updating!!! ur Story is great!
Mander B (Chapter 14) - Tue 03 Nov 2009
Well I must say that this is a good story, good enough to neglect my family for a few hours anyway. I dont know how I have not seen this story and it has 14 chapters. I really like it, you let the characters evolve. I want them to be together so bad but each chapter keeps you waiting. I like it. Your writing style is like 2 of my favorite authors here. Keep up the Awesome work. One minor thing, that one chapter you used the word, whilst a lot and was kind of ....rrrr.... but still Awesome.
autumngold (Chapter 14) - Mon 02 Nov 2009
I'm glad that Sesshoumaru is opening up to Kagome. Now she just needs to tell him about her problems with that creep Naraku. I would love to watch Sesshoumaru defend his pack! Naraku would wish he had never been born. Very nice update! Can't wait to read more!
autumngold (Chapter 13) - Fri 23 Oct 2009
I recommend for Kagome to get her phone number changed immediately. Naraku is a scary jerk. How dare he blame Kagome for his actions. If only Kagome trusted Sesshoumaru enough to tell him what's going on. I'm afraid that Naraku will try to hurt Ran. Thanks for the new chapter to your wonderful story! Please update again soon!
I love this story, can't wait for another update! *^_^*
autumngold (Chapter 12) - Sun 11 Oct 2009
Fun update! I love that Sesshoumaru and Kagome had such bad days at the same time! It's nice that they were able to help each other feel better. They are such good friends, I'm glad that they are taking their time before becoming more intimate. I'm so glad you updated, thank you! Can't wait to read more!
Rei (Chapter 12) - Sun 11 Oct 2009
I LOVE your story!
... (>,<)....and I think I made a mistake earlier. Cliqued works. :p eheheh....
I'll be waiting on the next chapter!
Oh my goodness! One of my new favorite stories I do believe! :D I would have reviewed every chapter.. but then I'd get too caught up in re-reading the chapters and end up forgetting to review.. =P Anyways, lovely story. At first, I admit, I was a bit skeptical and wasn't too sure about it but then once I got to read it I was soo hooked! I love the atmosphere and I absolutely adore your portrayal of Sesshomaru. I'm also a huge fan of Kagome's son, Ranmaru! I really can't wait to read more and I really hope that it doesn't end up being like.. really incredibly sad and someone dies or Kagome and Sesshomaru don't end up together... I get angry when that happens.. Just saying.. =P
rei (Chapter 3) - Sat 10 Oct 2009
I really like it so far! I just popped in to say there's a typo :p You meant cleche and instead wrote clique by accident ;3 Now, if you'll excuse me I'm anxious toget back to reading your story.
"But that's a clique"
"Hn" he agreed the last remark was a cleche.
Guess Who O.O (Chapter 9) - Tue 29 Sep 2009
I tried to read it, but i am still having a headache... soo i only got half way throught. i will finish reading it soon. Btw the first half, that i did read, was very good (as usual :P)
Cya tomorrow x
autumngold (Chapter 11) - Mon 28 Sep 2009
Fabulous story. I can't wait to read more. I love how Sesshoumaru dealt with Hojo, he so needed it. Of course, I really wish that Sesshoumaru had hit him. Since he can't take his anger out on Inuyasha now he needs someone to be mean to. Or is Kouga going to make an appearance? That would give Sesshoumaru plenty to be steamed about. I like how Sesshoumaru and Kagome interact. She seems to be the only one, besides Rin, that can make him relax. Please post another chapter soon! I really want to read more!
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