I wanted to add one more point ;)
As for people feeling angry that she was dishonest with Inuyasha about her coupling with Sesshourmaru, I completely agree that she is WRONG, wrong, wrong, wrong to let Inuyasha believe she was raped. What a horrible thing to (indirectly) accuse Sesshoumaru of. There is nothing right about it and she should have at least told Inuyasha he had not, even if she could not say anything else on the matter.
However, having to answer the question in the face of her best friend, the first love of her life? I can't say I don't completely understand her fear and despair at the thought of him finding out that not only did she willingly sleep with her captor, she enjoyed it immensely. Inuyasha will not understand, he will not be gentle with the situation, he will not emphathize with her. She knows Inuyasha well. I'm sure she suspects that he will call her horrible things, think horrible things about her & quite possibly never speak to her again. Just hours after being reunited with him, regretfully enough, I don't think *I* would be brave enough to tell him the full truth either.
She's inbetween a rock & a hard place.
Kamiki (Chapter 7) - Tue 14 Jun 2011
While I'd like to see Kagome a bit stronger, I can't say I fault the way she's written. If I'd been through what she has in this story, I'd be inclined to weeping as well. Sesshoumaru was foolish to think there'd be no consequences for breaking his word and treating her feelings so harshly, but I feel bad for the heartbreak he's experiencing now.
I hope she'll realize soon what she's in danger of losing, before it's too late!
Thanks for the story :)
Arrou (Chapter 7) - Wed 25 May 2011
I ha say I do not like Kagome in this story at all. The story itself is wonderful but her character is one that you read and hate :p. She cries and cries and cries and cries some more then cries again just for good measure. She is compeltely useless in terms of defending herself. And all she could see is Inuyasha. Talk about Jade colored glasses. Now not saying that Sesshomeru was prefact in his treatment of her because he wasnt but Kagome did not want to face the truth about herself so she always takes it out on other people. I am truely saddened that this Kagome was the kagome what Sesshomeru felt a....love? for because she is a rather weak woman. I damn near throw my laptop across the room when she lied about having sex with Sesshomeru even AFTER he gave her a choice to say yes or no and he would stop if she didnt want him to go further. Someone needs to give the girl a hard shake or beat her with the truth stick until she finally gets it.
I am curious though. Where is the fire in Kagome? The kindness and forgiveness that is notorious to her character? Granted she did take care of Sesshomeru when he was shot and almost killed but I think she would rather take her chances with staying with Sesshomeru rather then running around since she is a demon magnet. Plus she didn't know where the hell she was. So in short what is she....a step higher then a whore i would say. Normally I love her character sooo much. But in this story she is too weak minded for my tastes. I wonder what her beloved Inuyasha will think of his sweet Kagome when he finds out that she willing eff-ed his older brother twice. Ill stand by for an update. Please give someone to Sesshomeru that is actually worthy of his time and love.
I'm a little concerned that you can you can be an amazing artist AND author. It's rather...distressing. ;)
Sakuramaru (Chapter 7) - Wed 16 Jun 2010
WOW!!! Enticing story! I can't wait to read more! How often do you update?
hopuchan (Chapter 7) - Sun 23 May 2010
this is a great story! i hope you continue to post more chapters!
Indie (Chapter 7) - Mon 15 Mar 2010
This is a simply wonderful tale. I love how the timeline moves along, and the conflicts Kagome, and Sesshomaru find themselves facing. I do sincerely hope you come back to writing it someday. I'd love to know what happens.
~SimplyKrazy~ (Chapter 7) - Tue 02 Mar 2010
The thing that most strucks me is the fact that Kagome doesn't feel that she harbors feelings for Sesshoumaru when she clearly enjoys being eff-ed by him. I mean, what kind of decent woman would have sex without even finding her lover loveable? It makes me think that she is a whore.
On another point, I really like the plot. I remember reading the same beginning in some other fic but the grammar was really bad so I stopped reading it. Furthermore, the characters are acute on their depiction, but Kagome seems a bit off to me. Where's the fire in her? And Sesshoumaru's brutality against Inuyasha wasn't misplaced, but I didn't appreciate it. I guess it had to happen for the whole thing to continue on along and have a climax (the plot).
I really hate Kagome for lying, though. No matter what, I've always loved the character of Sesshoumaru more than her character (because I'm a girl, and I'm in love with Sesshy xD) so her betrayal is a really low hit on his love for her. I mean, what kind of girl can't see that he feels something for her? It's Sesshoumaru we're talking about! He would never approach a girl, specially if she's human, unless sexually driven or love driven. And even though the later one seems impossible, I believe it to be possible specially when he lets go of the girl!!!
Geezee!!! Some people are just plain BLIND!! And that includes YOU, Kagome!
Okay... Sorry :P Got carried away there xD
Please update soon!!! I really like this fic. God, if it were not for the great plot, I would have stopped reading with all the angst. It kills me!!! BUT I'll make another exception. This fic is worth it!
xoxo
I am really enjoying this story..but can I just say one thing that I hate...I hate Kagome and her willingness to blame Sesshoumaru for what happened between them. God, woman..fess up...don't blame him for what they did together. I absolutely LOVE Sesshoumaru in this story. He will always be amazing. I love the fact that he can change..and little by little he is showing Kagome that he is..but that ditz is too blind over that hanyou to see it. Geezzz!! But, I must know what happens next, so please continue on. Cannot wait for the next update.
devi (Chapter 7) - Sun 11 Oct 2009
YOU MUST UPDATE!!! this is one of the best ive read in a very long time! please dont leave me in the dark. Sesshomaru and Kagome must get back together??!! I need more of your wonderful story.
Devi (Chapter 3) - Sun 11 Oct 2009
Thank you so much for not making this into one of those crazy stories where Sesshomaru takes Kagome(sexualy) in the First chapter. I say this has been great so far. You have captured the characters so well. I love it!
kimiko` (Chapter 7) - Wed 30 Sep 2009
please update this. i woudl really like to see more!
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