together at last, aaaaawwwwwwww i just love romances and how they work out in the end. great story, i felt so warm and fuzzy inside. well ta ta :)
OMG~ You can't end it like it!
What is wrong with you? Lmao. I adore you!
I mean, I'm sitting here, all drawn in, and I want that mango soda thing, because girl from the way you wrote about it, it is simply the best drink in the whole freaking universe, lol.
Your writing was simply magical as usual - ever thought of writing a book? I'd buy it. Lol!
Anywho, I was drawn into their memories together, and I was just waiting for what went wrong, and of course I then felt like hitting Sesshybaby! I mean come on, he should have been more careful with such an important piece of paper! Sometimes he jsut has the attention span of a dog, I swear!
So frustrating. And now at the end, we learn Kaggie is back, and she was probably heartbroken that he never called her back! Gosh, I probably wouldn't approached him, because I would have thought I was making a full out of myself! He better do some good explaining, but then again, we will never know, because you ENDED it! Lmao.
No it was a nice way to finish it. I really love the summer feel there was about your words. You really know how to set the mood hun!
SeruleanOrbs (Chapter 1) - Fri 18 Sep 2009
| I loved it! Wonderful imagery; it led credence to the magic that Sesshou found himself wrapped in. Poor boy! He is so madly in love, to be so poetic! LOL. But truly, a wondeful one shot. I'd ask for more, but that might just dilute the magic.
| Beautifully written, romantic and sweet. One can easily envision it all through your words descibing it all. And isn't it just so sad to lose her number and not be able to find each other again for so long...maybe they can pick up where they left off. Now, little missy, as much as I adore ANYTHING you write, update WISTERIA again please. I cannot seem to get this fic out of my mind. Hugs, JEN
RayRay (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Sep 2009
| I found myself smiling and going "aww" all throughout this chapter. It was sooo sweet and romantic! It touched my hopeless romantic heart <3 I loved it, it was one of the best one shots I've ever read and it was a perfect ending. So cute! Made me happy :) I loved the details given, I could easily picture it all as I read it. Great job as always!
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