HAHA--Hunter's been put on the spot now! lol

This story rendered me speachless!  

There are so many points I want to make on how much I loved it, but its beyond me. 

I loved how it began.  They're relationship just didn't start, it progressed.  Kagome is such a lovely character!  I am glad she did not get stuck with that sorry excuse for a fiancee, and now Kenta -i believe his name is- is after her...  Is there no rest for the Pregnant Miko?  Okay I got side tracked...

Their relationship...   the pace and progress of their emotions and attraction for each other is comendable!!!  (trying to sound smart While complimenting you...  ; )   I find a slow gradual relationship works better for me to believe in the relationship!!  There are a few exceptions of course!!!

I am glad that you did not stop at the death of ...  and you continued to capture my attention!  

You have a great sense of humour, I found myself laughting in public once...  embarrassing, that it was! 

I found myslf loving the characters!   I love Inu Yasha all the more!  I love your orginal characters!!!   You bring them to life for me! 

This story rocked my Inuyasha World!

Good luck!

I hope you update son!

I love your story. Read all 52 chapters in one day. I really love most of your characters.

I think it's understandable if I don't love Yoshirou and his family so much. Also, even though Hunter is rather amusing, I find him rather out of place in the story. He just showed up out of no where really and seems like just another literary device to add some conflict and drama. As much as I like that you're giving Satomi a background, I just don't see the chemistry and value between the two's interactions.

I hope you don't mind my opinion. I'm still so glad I discovered this story.

The first part of the chapter was sweet and very cute.  Then you had to go and scare me to death!  At first, I thought a bad guy had gotten the drop on Inuyasha.  Thank goodness it was Hunter.  Cool name, btw.  Inuyasha is being honorably loyal by not giving Sess away.  That was great.  I have to wonder what Hunter did to get rejected.  That's so sad.  It's obvious that Satomi and Hunter love each other.  I hope there's hope for them.  :-(

Wow!!! Three chapters in one night! I don't know where you get your inspiration from but I sure am glad you have such an amazing imagination. This chapter was something else. InuYasha's poking at Kagome is such fun and she goes right back at him so well. I admire Sesshoumaru's restraint when InuYasha picks on him. I think if Inu uses the term "whipped" one more time, Kagome should tell Sessh what it means. Inu will be the whipped one, I'm sure. Is there a possibility that Satomi may overlook what Hunter does for a living? Or maybe he's an assasin or bounty hunter for hire and she can't marry him bacause of it? You do so well with bringing in new characters and weaving them into the story and my curiousity. The way Hunter was able to subdue InuYasha was just short of amazing. And Inu being afraid of facing Aria with that bracelet on was so funny. Thanks for the triple surprise...JEN

I love how close InuYasha and Kagome have become. Really how the whole new little family have gotten so close and genuinely caring for each other. I sure hope that the girls aren't plants for Kenta's payback. That would be just too sad,especially since Kya seems to find this boy's kisses are FINE! InuYasha is going to be just so proud! I can just see him giving the boy tips but then telling him to keep it respectful to please Aria. It looks like Hunter knows and is very good at investigating. The Taisho/Higurashi family has alittle added backup whether they want it or not. Great work, Lady O.  JEN

I figured Hunter to be involved with the yakuzza or something equally bad what with how she dumped him. I mean, she loved him but she told him to leave? Guess she's afraid of the fact that his job is dangerous and he could be killed, ne? Anyway, he seems like a man you don't want against you. Satomi should have known better than to call him...JEN

That marshmallow thing blew me away.  I was talking to my old hunting buddy on the phone today.  He's going elk hunting on horseback for the next couple days.  I'm going to ask him if he's taking marshmallows and graham crackers to make S'mores.  It will make him laugh his a** off.  S'mores and Jack Daniels. HaHa!   That is LIVING.

That's Kagome all over.  In the feudal era, she's engaged in this epic battle of good vs. evil, and she's packing picinic lunches, and her backpack is full of comic books and pocky.  It's so sweet!

Who else could have conjured up such an idea?  Hunter vs. InuYasha.  Mind boggling!

It IS "Hunter".  I loved that guy.  Why isn't that show in re-runs on cable?  What a weird and wonderful crossover.  You come up with the most interesting ideas.

WOW!!! Three chapters in one shot, all of them very good. I can't wait to see Kenta pay for messing with the inu family. Doesn't he understand that Youshiro was a jerk to want Kagome to have children by all three brothers? Basically he was willing to pimp out his wife. That's despicable. I'm glad Yoshirou is dead. Too bad for Inuyasha with that bracelet. Hope he manages to take it off or else Aria will not be too happy about the situation. Love this.

You make Souta a nice kid, too.  Usually, I could care less about secondary characters.  But you have a way of making them more than just a means to an end...  I'm intrigued by Hunter.

This Hunter guy, what the heck is he??? Kouga with a concealment spell? This Hunter guy seems dangerous, not one to mess with. These chapters just get better and better!!

Kagome & Satomi are very much alike. I think that is a ggod way to show why Kagome behaves as she does. Great chapter!!

Poor Kagome.  She's going to start thinking there's only ONE reason Sesshomaru keeps her around.  He's doing that GUY thing, acting as though she were dangerously incompetent, when in reality, she is just learing new things, and needs positive reinforcement.  Especially with the archery, he's acting like InuYasha in the anime, when Kagome first picked up a bow.  Things like that take practice!  But if he was TOO understanding, he wouldn't be Sesshomaru, would he? 

Enter Hunter.  This is a new twist.  You always surprise me, Oroyukae.  I don't know what to expect next...

That Cayanne Pepper scene was pretty funny.  Poor Kagome.  My husband loves things really hot.  Really, really, hot.  I made some goulash and put a very generous dose of Paprika in it.  That would have been fine, except a friend of his, who has acid reflux problems, stopped over unexpectedly, and ended up eating with us.  The poor guy.  I was so embarrassed!

I'm not usually to big on original characters, but Masaru is really a good kid.  I can see InuYasha's son turning out like that, with his good qualities, but his bad ones tempered, because he had a family to support him growing up, as InuYasha did not...

I was thinking that making a trip to Toyoko for some things that Kagome could do while Sesshoumaru was busy was a good idea. She could also maybe invest in a small generator so she can listen to her music when the batteries are worn down. I love to dance and even pregnant my husband loved to watch me entertain myself. They more than likely are too far for television but maybe a laptop with satellite can help keep her occupied. Maybe Sessh will find it interesting to see how she can find all kinds of information on net. Then there are books. It's so easy to get caught up in a good fic that time just flies by. She will be getting to the point where just relaxing and sittting around while she waits for the pup to be born. Then there's always gardening. Even she can't mess that up, can she? Now, as far as the...hmm, lovin thru the back door...though written and expressed well, I am not a fan of this act and I will say that even though many find it eroctic, I can only see the medical repurcussions of such an act. To me, this is a one way street meant for the sole purpose of elimating waste and bacteria from the body. When I was young I wiped from the butt to the front and got an ecoli type of infection vaginally. It was no pleasant experience and my doctor told me to always wipe from front to back. Now, you're probably wondering why I wrote this...A male's penis is like a straw of sorts. When he pushes in "lubrications" and semen come out and when he pulls out it also sucks in whatever is in the channel he is thrusting back and forth in. Then, whether he cleans himself first or not, he might enter the vagina and release bacteria...see my point? Scold me if you will, as I know this is only a fic and many have done this act and it's pleasing and they never got sick from doing so, but in all honesty, I can't see doing it without a condom for protection...not that I would anyway. But I've been wanting to say this for a long while and once I did and got a very long winded email telling me where I could go. But in all fairness, this is a review and NOT a flame. I HIGHLY respect you, Lady O. You must know that by now and I am in NO way dissing your writing. I just had to get this out.  JEN

Awww, poor Kagome!!! She only wanted to treated her new mate to her style of cooking. Something new and that she herself loves to eat...but I feel for Sesshoumaru, that stuff is life threatening. My husband had heard it was good for the heart as well as many other things and a friend had made me some of her special casserole with Chayenne Pepper. I, too, thought death was emenate. The burning...my stomach revolted in the worse way imaginable which only increased the feeling of death as I could hardly breathe. Antiacide helped. Then the near misses with those arrows...poor, poor Sessh...and Kagome, too! I read these last two chapters together but still tried to review separately but blew it with Satomi's old beau. Looks like if this goes the way I think then Kenta is going to wish he never said anything to Kagome or even thought about revenge. Until the next posting... thank you again for caring enough to seek me out. Keep the good work going and tell WM (I cannot say her pen name, please do not take offense) I give her alot of credit for polishing up the small errors and making this fic a nicer read. Maybe in the future if you and she wants, she can go over your old fics and fix the typos and such as I really, really feel that you are an exceptioal writer, Lady O. *respectfully bows* Yours truly, JEN