Wonderful! The thing that sticks out about this story is that it is in NO way your typical Kag/Sess. Every story I've ever read, it's always Kagome that's in the bad relationship. But you switched it around and it works SO well. Also, I love that you tackled erectile dysfunction. Sesshoumaru is always portrayed as such a virile character, it's nice to see him have a problem getting it up and it's equally nice to see Kagome being the one to help with that problem.
Also, Butterscotch Brownies FTW!
As a thank you for this story, here's my personal recipe for butterscotch brownies:
Preheat oven to 350?
Melt into a saucepan: 1/4 cup of butter -- stir until dissolved, slowly stir in 1 cup of brown sugar
Cool ingredients slightly then beat in:
1 egg
1tsp vanilla
A dash of nutmeg and cinnamon (no real measuring here, flavor to taste, baby.)
1/2 cup flour
1 tsp double acting baking powder (I use Clabber Girl, btw.)
1-1/2 cups of oatmeal
Pour the mixture into 9x9 in. pan. Liberally sprinkle the top of the unbaked brownie-mix with cinnamon to taste. Bake for 20 to 25 minutes.
| Did I say I only liked long stories? I take it back. Write more one-shots! That was hot.
Sekiaku (Chapter 1) - Fri 07 Aug 2009
| I loved that this time Shesshoumaru wasn't perfect and he had a flaw that I'm sure every man fears. I thought the way the whole story was written was great.
| The story was definitely original. I loved it. Aside from a few spelling errors, it was very enjoyable. Great job!!!
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