You are such a cliffy hanger!! Please update soon! Fantastically written and very perceptive. Love is blind and you wrote it well in this story.

Tragic, so infused with angst. Final paragraph was killer.

i love it thats all i can say... it was really good your great at writeing fanfictions!!!!! :)

God, that was more angsty than I thought it would be, but a well written one shot nevertheless. Kagome makes me angry though. Lol, I really wanted to bitch slap her and right hook Sesshoumaru. I was sitting here, yelling in my head, 'Fight back! What the hell are you doing woman? You're stronger and better than this. Don't take this shit from him!' So, if you can elicit such a response from me, then job well done.

Hmmm, when I went back to fanfic stories I noticed it said this is a oneshot. I should have paid more attention to the summary categorizing it a oneshot. Seems sad, this has such promise and potential and it left me feeling there should be more. I'd be happy if you'd consider many this a chapter fic though. JEN

Excellently penned. The tension, the turmoil, it was so surreal and utterly believable. Though I have read many with this same premise I am inclined to be an overly curious creature and I must see how you twist this into something all your own. You have promise if this first chapter is anything to go by. JEN

Very nicely written, and very promising. Please continue.