Oh wow!!  So much happening!  Now is this a further transformation from what occured at the lake with the demon in the lake, or from her revival at the lake with the fire spirit?  If I'm not mistaken, she still has the ability to store youkai energy into those markings?  I'm a lil confused on that.  Either way, I think this supports the contradiction that is her body now.  I also like ninkai the most for her new description.  It's a compilation of words that sound feminine.  
I'm really interested in this disturbance in time that has occured.  I feel like it falls in line with the same 'bad feeling' she had when she first set out to head home before that mess with Inuyasha and Kikyou happened?  I didn't even consider that so much time had passed in the feudal era for her.  Six to seven years is a looonng time.  But with the pace of the arcs, it sorta makes sense.  
In Inuyasha's case, he has been given a 'new start' I suppose.  He doesn't have the group anymore nor anyone's loyalty.  Is he still crazy in the head?  I feel like he's the loose ends that will come back to pounce in a bad way in the story.  Him and/or Kikyou, that is.  She could be a bigger threat now that Kagome's family is in the era. 
I figured the fight between Sesshomaru and Jiji was BOUND to happen.  And I'm so glad it did.  Sesshomaru needed a whoopin to get the wake up he hopefully received.  I honestly haven't found him to be TOO out of character.  He has certain moments that make you think if this is what he would do, but that temper and ire seems spot on!!  lol  The most enjoyable part of that whole bout was the realization that he pissed off someone who can match that temper and then some.  I had a good 'rofl' moment when he told them to be careful cause he broke his leg.  XD  Thanks for that.  Sounded like he had an agenda with the squirmish and had positve results.    I pictured this to not be over from Sessho's point of view.  
I'm seriously sooo glad you are continuing this story.  It.  Is.  AWESOME.  
  
      
daniii (Chapter 28) - Sun 14 Aug 2011 
how about demi-god shes both blessed and powerful enough in my eyes :) love the story by the way keep going 
that especially includes jiji love him his character is awesome. 
      
Pebbles (Chapter 26) -  Sat 13 Aug 2011 
Ok, my heart skipped several beats when Jiji died.  Seriously, I was holding my heart and going WHYYYYYYYYYY?!  But foolishly enough, I believed him gone for good.  Oh that Jiji...and oh that YOU for writing it.  lol 
I am sooo glad that you brought to light her mourning for her child.  Because that was painful.  And the fact that she wasn't over it and wanted to die to see him again, made so much sense.  I liked that.  Thanks for that.  Although, you give much to consider in Sesshomaru's words of her love being returned when she has more pups.  Of course that can easily be misconstrued (especially if you take into consideration who said it), but that sounds like it may lead to more 'interesting' chapters down the line. 
I'm curious as to what has really fallen upon everyone with her 'revival'.  I'm guessing there's a debt to be paid.  
And thank u, thank u, thank u, for NOT killing off Jiji!!  *hugs* 
      
Pandora (Chapter 28) -  Thu 11 Aug 2011 
Update Soon Plz!!!! I love your story!!! 
      
Great chapter! So she has Souta and her Mom to live for plus help to take care of Kuro and Shippo. Thank goodess Souta is there to help her just release and deal with everything. I can see him being her savig grace. 
      
Okay I met  Ry?h? !!  LOL I don't know what happened when I hit the submit button!!! 
      
WOW!! Another fabulous chapter!  I love long chapters they just allow me to sink further into a story I love!!  
Once again let me tell you how much I love Jiji! Watching him teach Sesshoumaru a lesson was a pleasure, hopefully Sess actually learned something from the encounter! I think Jiji shoild be nominated for Father of the year! LOL 
Mama and Souta have now entered the story and Kagome has a whole new set of powers to deal with! I can't wait to see how this new arch plays out.  You're one hell of an incedible storyteller and I can't wait to see what twists and turns you think up next!! Each chapter is fantastic reading! 
  
As for naming Kagome's "It" I really like Ry?h? 
  
      
HUff...I think I took like...three hours reading this lol But is completely amazing! Congrats on the nomination! 
      
Heheh, I absolutely love Kagome's servants! And this chapter was amazing! 
      
ruhiko (Chapter 28) -  Wed 10 Aug 2011 
Damn it, I know the grandpa was a little annoying but he was SO funny! Good bye Kagome's grandpa~! TT^TT 
      
zandria (Chapter 27) -  Fri 29 Jul 2011 
awww again your stories end to soon i can't wait for you to update again  ^^. 
      
Jazmine (Chapter 27) -  Wed 27 Jul 2011 
Oh. . .My. . .God!! Aaaahhh that cliff hanger is gunna kill me!! D: Omg your story is so awesome and i love it!! Please update soon and keep up the awesomeness work of yours :D 
      
Niecy (Chapter 27) - Tue 26 Jul 2011 
OMG!!!! That is so crazy and I can't wait for the next entry. You are an amazing writer and I love your portrayal of Sesshomaru. He is not that far out of character than you think. Just keep writing like you are and maybe update a little quicker and I'll be thrilled. In regards to Kagome's "it" I would just go with hybrid but I am not that much of a creative person. Anyway thanks for the update and I hope your well in every aspect of your life. 
      
ruhiko (Chapter 27) -  Wed 20 Jul 2011 
OMG What a EVIL cliff hanger~!!! O_O 
      
You know, i find it odd how people will use everyday items as description references for stories in the fuedel era. Take for example, your description of the size of the liquid "ball" was that of a pingpong ball. An eyeball would have been a close enough reference. But, hey, it's your story. 
      
Jocelyn (Chapter 27) - Wed 20 Jul 2011 
Finally Kagome tells Sesshomaru off without holding i give her props for that. He really does need to suck it up and think about what she said because in a way she is right.But how come her house is on fire is her family safe. I kinda feel sry for Kagome on that note. 
      
Oh no!!! What or who could have possibly done that? On another note, I think it was good that she put Sess in his place like she did. These were things that were needed to be heard. Wonder what will happen next time they meet? 
      
Great Chapter again.  I am looking for a candidate for you 'it' word.  I'll PM you if I find something interesting.  Keep up the good work.  I hope that someone has nominated your story, I keep getting busy and forget.  Sorry.  Love this story.  The characterization is great.  Kagome is really strong (in every respect), and Sesshoumaru is the way I think he would behave in war time.  I personally believe that under all that pent up anger and self righteousness is a feeling and caring demon lord.  I think it's right on.  I do believe that he would offer her pups in the heat of the moment.  He knows that she is worth his time, just his brain hasn't caught up with his instincts yet. He he he :D.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  So glad to see you posting to this story again. Love it. 
      
Loveyaa (Chapter 27) -  Wed 20 Jul 2011 
Alot has happened (as usual). Kagome is back and now her and Jiji have ganged up on Sesshoumaru. But then she is once again off to Kaede's village and then home where tragedy strikes. I do believe that the conversation about children was an interesting one and I can't wait to see how that one plays out. The characters do seem to be getting away from themselves a little bit, but you could chalk it up to them going through all of these life altering experiences. I know the story will continue to hold intrigue and interest. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next and hope that Kagome's family is fine :) 
      
Suniko (Chapter 27) -  Tue 19 Jul 2011 
OMG OMG OMG OMG! IM so into this story! I LOVE IT! I LOVE how you think! I can tell through your story that you are a beautiful person. (im not talking sexual) i mean your soul, your mind. 
Ive been thinking of what word u could use to descide "it" what about some mystcial creatiors from farytale? or a The Youkai Miko, or Hanyou Miko. but i will wiki some mystical creatiers sometime. 
keep up the great work. please update asap i cant wait for it. 
Suniko 
      
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