This was fantastic. I love it, a story of healing. I love the allusions to all of the different components of a fairytale. Bonus karma for you for this and your token has been delivered to your profile

Sorry, didn't proof read: Pretty interesting. You kept it simple which was good since to go deep and angst on a story means the story should be simple yet deep. I fail when it comes to angst, my stories are more on the side of humor, adventure and character development, therefore I would like to say I enjoyed your short oneshot fanfic (though it is leaving quite a bad aftertaste since I enjoy Kagome/Sessy pairing to the core). Anyway, cheers for the short read ^^ Please, as a writer, do not be little your work. If you belittle your work, then it would not only be a sign of disrespect to yourself, but also to the people/readers as well.

pretty interesting. you kept it simple which was good since to go deep and angst on a story means the story should be simple yet deep. I fail when it comes to angst, but stories are more lie humor, adventure and character development, therefore I would like to sat I enjoyed your short oneshot fanfic (though it is leaving quite a bad aftertaste since I enjoy Kagome/Sessy pairing to the core). Anyway, cheers for the short read ^^

Please do not belittle your own work. The cadence was pleasing and the subject matter a refreshing diversion from the usual. I enjoyed it, and you should be proud.