This is another good chapter. Once again, I love being personally recognized for reviewing! :-P I'm interested about how Sesshomaru is going to come into play as a dominant caracter, although I do have several ideas of what might happen. Keep it up!
I quite enjoyed this chapter. Things are progressing quite smoothly. I am interested in learning more about the shrine and the priestess with whom Kagome was able to make something of a connection. I am also anticipating the group's reaction to Kagome's eventual departure. I wonder if she will break down and take Shippou with her anyway. So many questions still! I shall await the next update with anticipation!
fatcatmom (Chapter 3) - Tue 28 Jul 2009
Great story! Great character developmnet and pace. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Jenna (Chapter 3) - Mon 27 Jul 2009
Yay! I love being recognized for leaving reviews! This was another great chapter, and I can't wait for everybody's reactions to Kikyo joining the group. I agree with Priestess Sianna, this is a very engaging story and it will be nice to see where it goes. The one thing I would ask for before you do it is to make sure the Sess/Kag relationship development is paced and not overly rushed. So many authors make this mistake and it was be so sad if it were to happen to you. The best of luck in the next chapters, can't wait!
Zesaika (Chapter 3) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
Oh, My..... Awesomeness. Really. It really blew me away. I'd really, REALLY appreciate it if you were able to update as quickly as possible! You just got yourself a regular reviewer!! *Grins cheesily*
stars (Chapter 3) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
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I know most writers make Kikyou one of the villains or keep her cold and distant, but once in a while it's nice to have her as one of the good guys whether she's friends with Kagome or not. I can't wait to see everyone's reactions, especially Inuyasha's.
Another engaging chapter! I was a little nervous when Kikyou came early, but I'm glad she decided to join the group. I'm still not entirely sure I trust her just yet, but I think her decision will make for some interesting stuff ahead. Again, can't wait to see what Inuyasha's reaction will be when Kagome finally does leave the group! I wonder where she will go! Hmm... questions, questions! Well, I guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out!
First of all thanks for the shout-out, and the recommendation!! I was really surprised and I can't tell you how much I appreciate it!!
Second, I continue to enjoy this story!!! I LOVE the way you portrayed Kikyou. I found her to be very in character; not not overly done or a total b**ch as some authors tend to do. It was very believable! Nice job!! I also liked Inuyasha's reaction to what Kagome said and I am quite interested to see what he will say when he finds out what she said to Kikyou.
Keep up the fantastic work! I eagerly await the next chapter!
stars (Chapter 2) - Mon 13 Jul 2009
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Jenna (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Jul 2009
Wow, I didn't see that ending coming. I guess that is what you were going for though, it was great. I've never really read a story that started out like that, it was a nice change of pace. Thanks.
Kim (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Jul 2009
You are off to a very good start! Will she keep her vow, I wonder?
Okay so I became interested in reading this because the title is very similar to a story I wrote a little while back. Mine is called Night of the New Moon. Mine is a Mir/Kag paring though.
Anyway, I was quite pleasantly surprised to find that I really enjoyed this!! The writing was really good and the characterizations were on point! You did a great job with this and I'd LOVE to see you continue!
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