That was adorable. I think the connection you made with Kagome and Rin was nice. I like the image you paint of Kagome in your writings. The crush thing is definitely a good place to start. Like I mentioned, you seem to have a good grasp on Kagome. I can't wait to read how your Sesshoumaru comes out!
That was adorable, great job! XD the last time I went to the zoo, the giraffe was licking a pole O.o
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