A very thought-provoking piece, one I think most can relate to, really. The voice is strong and while not rhyming, the flow is good. Nicely done.

The anonymous narrator obviously has alot on their mind to quandry the infinite diffences and balance of darkness and light. It could describe our fav characters or the cosmos itself - very mind-developing ideas and so well described. Good job...

A very nice read. You were never specific as to who the narrator of the poem was, but that was one of the best parts, it could have easily been anyone. Over all it was a very well written poem, and I can't wait to see more of your work in the future!!

A nicely done poem, exploring the differences and meanings of darkness and light.  A very contemplative piece, could be describing Sesshoumaru and Kagome, but it could be anyone or anything because of it's ambiguiousness.  Well done.

I really liked this. I am a huge fan of incremental repetition. Your use of 'Darkness and Light' was inspired, and I think that your use of the metaphor of shades of grey and the fact that Kagome is supposedly so pure but has black hair and Sesshoumaru is dressed in white and is pale with silver hair but is youkai and therefore supposedly evil was wonderful. Great job! I really think that you did a great job here.

Very nice poem, though I would love to see a story that went with it, :).  As is, it was a very nice read and hope to see more from you in the future.