Good, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
Wow, honestly. I love this story! Just found it today and finished reading it within a few hours!
I enjoy your writing style very much! I would like to explain, how your writing sounds to me (I am not english, so I think I understand your style a bit different than the others... :D )
Anyway, this story is kind of... angsty, and a bit of drama. I feel like I am always on edge and fearing the outcome of this and that action of Kagome/Sesshomaru, like when Kagome rejected Sesshomarus kiss. The reaction of Sesshomaru nearly made me growl... xD
Always the thoughts of... what if... what would happen, when... etc... what will happen now? Is he going to leave Kagome behind and moves on?
Also, I like it how you describe the feelings, the situations, the details like the weather or atmosphere within the camp or when they are elswhere. That you also take the time to describe the feelings and thoughts of the other members of this story, makes it more "real". And the feelings are very precise and understandable. That Kagome did not throw herself at him when he tried to seduce her... It was absolutely correct of her to reject him (again). Because she still loves Inuyasha...somewhat...
She does show him her affections and all, but she is taking it slow, while he is impatient and wants more. I can imagine, it would sting his male pride being rejected twice by the same woman, who does show him her "love".
Anyway, keep up this good piece of story! I really enjoy it!
Cheers
Itoe
Oh, I do so love Eri in this chapter! She's the real friend of the bunch!
I'm so sorry I'm not a frequent reviewer, RL is a hard mistress, but...
THANK YOU SO MUCH for the update! This is one of my favorite fics of all time! Totally worth the waiting! You're AWESOME!
So glad to see another chapter and I was happy to see Kagome finally tell hojo off. i am looking forward to the next chapter. I really like this story please update another chapter soon.
Respectfully,
kag/sess4ever
I'm glad your back, cool chapter. Please don't take months to update the next chapter, keep it coming.
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Please update soon.
I agree with everyone else: The formatting for this chapter is really, really off. Had to scroll back and forth until finally I gave up, copied it and pasted it into MS Office so I could read it properly.
Despite that, I loved this chapter for its simplicity though I look forward to more chapters of this story since it's one of my favorites :) Keep up the good work!
Yay.... you update. I don't knew how many times I've read,and relead this story.
It's one of my favorites. I love the way how you describe Kagome and Sesshou relation and the Way how Sumire react to intention of Sesshoumaru to Kagome and how she resnse to him. I think that will made Sesshou think seriously.
And Kagome.... hidden in the closet...ahahahaha that won't made embarrecement go away...
please continue this great story as soon as you can...
Please update the next chapter quick like now, keep it coming.
As always, well worth the wait! <3 You're quite a talented writer!
I've been waiting for an update for so long! :3 I truly enjoy this story that you have written! It's nice to see the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Sumire! So intense! I can't wait for further interractions. :)
Could you repost the last chapter, please? It was spread out across the entire page, where I had to scroll across the page to read it...:( Formatting must have been off, or something. Thank you! :D
I love this story! I am so glad you are writing on it again! Thank you! I love the way Kagome's moher threw Sesshoumaru with her question and her agreement. I cannot wait until the next chapter is out! Kagome/Sesshoumaru are my favorite reading! Thank you for writing such a great story.
Something weird happened with this chapter. The sentences keep going off the edge of the screen, until the end of the paragraph. Makes it rather difficult to read. You might want to look into this.
thanks for the update loved it.
Thanks for the chapter, it is my Birthday gift! Since my Birthday was on Saturday, keep it coming.
100 % love this story. I hope you update again soon. I could picture Kagome hidding in the linen closet with her hands over her head.
Ah, the joys of the fiance' meeting the family.... You did such a good job of describing it. :D
I love this story so much. I wish I hadn't fallen behind, but I'm happy I'm back on track. Since finals are next week for me, reading is such a destresser. I can't wait for an update.
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