You surely have a talent for writing but I don't think the title fits the story. The only chemical reaction took place when Sesshoumaru's saliva came into contact with Kagome's arm cast. You need a plotline and follow it until the end. This was a bit scattered, as if you had put several short fanfictions together. I still liked it a lot.
Sorry about the last review. I did not realize the story was complete.
MORE PLEASE!!!!
Nice story, good romance. The parts are all very interesting and all the different themes come together nicely into a cohesive whole.
lol nice lol
love it, especially those 3 inu female's reactions. That made me roll on the ground and laugh my heart out, literally. Please update very soon!! ^_^
Haha I like her reaction at the end. I'm glad there getting closer. :D
Sneaky inu! Kagome needs to purify his butt - just a little! Very good, very funny and very unique take on the common theme. You have a marvelously creative mind and managed to turn out a fresh, delightful tale!
I noticed just a few things - it is so hard to find the errors we, ourselves, make. Imagine my chagrin everytime MLMonty posted a new chapter of our story, Cultural Differences and I would read it and find an error in it. I had the same problem with my two drabbles, as soon as I posted them and read them through, I found errors. Drives me nuts - and I haven't far to go!
On top of everything else, she was [being] beginning to think that Sesshomaru
unless he has proof when accusing a lord or lady of [hire] higher status
Sesshomaru so that you would learn my clan's ways
to avoid anyone in particular [in] any longer
LMAO! Totally hilariuos! Poor kagome...what she gets herself into...hehe
oh and the plot thickens. please update. please!please!please!
Why do I find it hilarious that a condom was able to break the silence between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. It could be in the condom's new ad. . . "Not just for birth control anymore, . . " Thanks for the update! Can't wait for your next post!
Ok finally caught up!! The flow of this story is awesome, its not rushed, but its not dragging either! I also like how the story still moves along even though its mainly in reply to challenges!! Once again, i loved this and look forward to the next one!!
Ok i just had to review here, i'm still reading the rest and trying to catch up but i just had to say something here!
Firstly, Yay another story from you, you know how much i love your work and sorry i haven't been able to review your other stories, my computer is 'FINALLY' going long enough for me to read and review stories so here goes:
The first chapter; Inuyasha is such an ass, 'his shard detector' can't wait for Kagome or Sesshomaru to put him in his place, that really pissed me off with his lil' comment at the end when Sesshomaru grabbed her.
Second chapter; I am really starting to get into this and its only been two chapters LoL!! Hope Kagome pays attention to what that snake youkai said, cause it looks like things are really going to get interesting now!
Ok so now i've said my peace, sorry it went on for a bit, but now i'm going to read the rest of the chapters that you've done!
*is totally amused*
Hi!
I don't think you have right autumngold. It is not about safekeping, but controlling.
She isn't a tool nor a broodmare and she has the rigt to choose the way she lives. About helping her, he choose it as his duty in this war, so why should he complain?
Oh, and hurt his WHAT? Ha ha ha. I'm sorry but we speaking about Sesshoumaru. You could hurt a mountain before...
Wow Kagome, way to be grateful! It's not like Sesshoumaru had just saved her from being raped twice, and tended to her after she was hurt. He's trying to keep her safe and she explodes. I hope that she apologizes and tells him why she was upset. She must have really hurt his feelings. Please post again soon!
please updata
GAh it ended there! Nice chapter. Love it!
I just read the whole thing--awesome woman! Karma for you too!
I like this! Please update soon! :)
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