| Ohh, this is GOOD! Please more, more. I am enjoying this storyline. Continue..on.
       
Jenna (Chapter 3) -  Sun 09 Aug 2009 
| Ahhh!! i love it!!! update soooon please!!
and i love the legnth of your chapters..
its perfect:]
       
stars (Chapter 3) -  Sun 09 Aug 2009 
| please updata
       
| Love your long chapters.  I like your use of dialogue and flashbacks, it makes your writings style very colorful and makes the reader feel they are close to the action.  Keep up the good work!
       
| I love this type of Sess/Kag story, where Sess is a brutal businessman.  Your writing is very engaging, you really know how to draw a reader into your story, and make them care about the characters.  Excellent work, I can't wait for more!
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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