:droooooooools: Uhm. MT, you've killed me. Just saying. Ohh, but I loved how you alternated between the two passions - it really keeps you involved! (If you aren't already in this wonderful short story!) Love it!
RayRay (Chapter 4) - Sun 20 Dec 2009
Woooow, I can sooo not wait to read the next part of this! I couldn't tear my eyes away from the smuttyness on the screen. How erotic! I especially love how you keep going back and forth between future and past like you did within the story. It makes it all the better--especially since the future Kagome and Sesshomaru are seeing flashes of their past selves. Love it love it love it! Can't wait for more <3
Well, my my, that was intensely erotic. The echoes of the past, carry forward to the future, which now bodes well for them to be together. So sweet, and it left me with a feeling of hope and optimism, for a happier life in this present time...
Ah, this story is so beautiful and melancholy, but filled with hope. And now I see you have written more, so on to the next... What a lovely treat!
Akay (Chapter 4) - Fri 18 Dec 2009
I'm really enjoying this. The conversation they had all those centuries back was very deep. Poor Kagome. I thought it very touching that he joined her on her journey as well and promised to find her in their next lives. That was sweet of someone who you barely know. Very touching indeed. And OMG wow that last chapter! BOY WAS SHE DARING! I can't wait to see the next part of this. And if I knew how to draw I would so make a fanart for you of the scene where he was touching and playing with her while she play the instument. I kept seeing that mental image in my head and even I had to blush. Alas I can't draw, but that seemed to be a very intimate scene!
MY GODS! You MUST continue that soon! My heart was pounding as I read it!
Ambra (Chapter 4) - Fri 18 Dec 2009
The first 3-chapter part was amazingly romantic while this one is amazingly erotic. It may be smut, but at leat it is a poetic and well written one!
Keep going: I really want to see the destiny of the quail egg! :P
So is the present day Sesshoumaru the same as the past Lord Sesshoumaru? Is he still a demon in the present? Can you clarify that for me? Keep up the amazing work and update soon :P
| Aww... This was... absolutely charming! I loved it! I'm a sucker for bittersweet endings, and then you also get the happy ending too. It's endearingly lovely. ^_^ Great story; I really enjoyed reading it.
Patricia (Chapter 3) - Thu 30 Jul 2009
| Your a breath taking author! I hang on your everyword. This love story was truley beautiful.
Azurena (Chapter 3) - Sun 19 Jul 2009
| That was so. . .beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. I cried three different times while I was reading. It was wonderful. I don't know if I've ever read something so emotional before. Again, it was beautiful, both in content and how it was written. I absolutely loved it.
| Man, I so would've reviewed the latest chapters earlier!! But man MT, you sure know how to write. So sad yet sweet at the same time... Such a happy ending for the two of them though! I applaud you, Miss Teak! :clap clap clap: Another great addition to your writing collections!
scarletwitchextreme (Chapter 3) - Sat 04 Jul 2009
| this was absolutely fucking beautiful, i cried and cried and I loved it, And so happened I was listening to memiors of a geisha soundtrack while reading it just went beautifully together and i cried more...sigh
| I loved this fic!! I hated you at the end, but that just makes you a great writer. Just wanted to let you know. :)
Selah (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Jun 2009
I just finished reading this story a couple of days ago. You went into the story on a solem note, my goodness who ever made a suicide seem so hopefull and promising, you've certainly have done it. I like how in the end after they witnessed themselves in the past that they didn't automatically remember each other, they just were placed with information to give them a nudge in their relationship. I really enjoyed it.
That was a beautiful story. Is the present Sesshou still a demon lord? And will u consider doing a sequel? Keep up the good work :P
| I am so sorry that I have not reviewed this story. I thought it was very interesting and sad but it had a happy ending and I loved that. It was something different and would like to see more of the same. You have such wonderful writing talent and creativity. Don't rush this because you have plenty of time left in your life, but I pray that you meet the man of your dreams when the time is right...you are such a romantic and lovely person with a sweet personality. I know your parents have to be very proud of your accomplishments. I've read every story that I can find written by you and you have such a fantastic talent for writting but your schooling comes first and formost. I am proud to know you...I feel like a grandmother to you. *many hugs and smiles just for you*
That was a wonderful end to an excellent story! I enjoyed it very much.
That was beautiful... I am glad that they found each other again. Wonderful!
| I really adore this ficlet. Though the tragic life that Kagome had to live, the fates saw fit to grant her wishes to reunite with her love in the future. It was sad but so romantic. I loved that Sesshoumaru carried her so tender and lovingly from the river to lay her to be found with his crest in her hand so she was not buried/burned as if her life had no meaning. He may not have spoken of love but to me, his actions spoke louder than words. Beautifully written, little one. You never cease to amaze me. JEN
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