*sniff sniff* that was just beautiful, and sad. but very well done. at first i thought she was simply mute after the accident, so i was surprised that it was a photo on her tombstone. excellent piece.
If you've read my last comment on Wisteria, you know that I love sad endings, being the oddity that I am.
I've read a lot of one-shots where they depict Sesshoumaru as the one who dies, but I like this one on how we are given Sesshoumaru's outlook on Kagome's death.
That, and whenever I hear the word 'angel' come out of his mouth, I get all choked up. I guess it's just one of those words ;)
Keep it up, you make my days happy ones.
That was horrible! *sniffle* But...I really loved it *cries*
RayRay (Chapter 1) - Sun 31 May 2009
Aww T_T MissTeak you made me cry again. It was so sad! I enjoyed reading it though. Anger tends to blind people and poor Sesshomaru just had to be the one who went into a blind fit of anger u-u Poor Sess and Kagome! Love gained, love lost, it's so sad!
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 May 2009
Wow. You did kill her...but in an entirely tearful way. *sigh* Must go find something to cheer me up now. Very good with the emotional play in this one, Miss Teak.
What do I think?...hmm, let me finish wiping away the tears first...ok, that was really sad but you know? It does happen. I knew many hot headed, jealous guys when I was younger that would do the most stupid things all in the name of love. I wondered, is that really love? Anyway, looks like Sessh learned a lesson in anger management too late and now the world and he is missing the love of an angel. Very well written, my friend, and a lesson to be learned too. Hugs, JEN
This was just too emotional but well done :( *hugs and smiles*
Miss Teak!! This is so TERRIBLY sad... T_T Sessh is distress pulls at my heartstrings, but for some odd reason, they're probably my favorite moments... Amazing job and beautifully written! Now Miss Teak, I feel inspired to write something myself! Love you, love you! And, your AWESOME stories <3
That was beautifully written, and very touching, but it was just SO SAD! You always manage to push my emotional buttons, now I will probably dream sad dreams...
Oi is that ever sad.
Very nicely done
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