I wonder just how Kouro thinks he can get out of this. The sea people know what he did. I hope the sea king is still alive. Ooh, he pisses me off. It's nice to see Kagome and Sesshoumaru happy.
Ah, foolish Kouro. Not really Sess or Inu he has to worry about. He seems to have no clue as to who Kagome is or the fact that she can kill him herself. He will learn too late I guess.
A purely smut chapter - LOVE IT! This story was due for one of those. *^_^* I loved it - marvelous! It was so ot, and I am so jealous of Kagome it is freaking ridiculous! Can't wait for more!
~Sandreline
That sounded delish. Too bad my hubby is diabetic. Great Job.
OH H0T DAMN im sure he did love to be a bad dog smh....LOVED IT
Kanna37 (Chapter 58) - Thu 17 Dec 2009
Bad dog? Wow... the mind boggles. I'd love to have a bad Sesshoumaru.
Amber
stars (Chapter 58) - Thu 17 Dec 2009
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Wow. I'm jealous. Can I have some of the dessert too? That seems like the best dessert in the whole world... Sesshou wit strawberries and cream. Yum. And I didn't know that he was ticklish. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
autumngold (Chapter 58) - Thu 17 Dec 2009
I hope that Sesshoumaru realizes what a lucky dog he is! He and Kagome are so good together! Thank you for the update! Can't wait for more!
LMAO omg that end had me dying in my chair..poor shippo he is still so innocent about those things until practically told..smh that was funny and i think he is going to need more than four drinks but thats just my opinion
mary (Chapter 3) - Wed 09 Dec 2009
i feel as if the scene in chapters two and thre were two dimensional. there's something missing. i'm not sure how to say it. i also think you gave too much away in the first chapter. i felt that whatever pain that started to fester was cut too short. the dialog could have been more specific (what business? i think in real life he would have at least said the name of his business. thus giving us a clue as to what he does, further solidifying whatever image that was in our heads). the "flow" wasn't as smooth as i wish it could have been. the transitions awkward and emotions cut short.
the premise was lovely though. the whole angst is there. i think the fleshing out part's not yet. so much mystery could be had. i felt cheated out of my roller coaster ride of emotions.
Aww... poor poor Shippou. So very innocent. Maybe he really does need a girlfriend. I look forward to seeing what Kagome and Seshhou plan to do with their dessert. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
stars (Chapter 57) - Wed 09 Dec 2009
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Ok, the whole innocent questioning of dessert by Shippo was hilarious. This was a great chapter. Keep up the awesome job!
Okay, I have to stop to review before I even finish the darned chapter! I've been reading this straight through and enjoying it to the hilt; you've even made me cry (not that that is a feat), but the exchange: "You could talk the devil out of his shirt." "It's hanging in my closet. Want to see it." Had me laughing so hard it scared the cats! Especially when I fell off the chair and rolled on the floor! This is a really engrossing story, if it were a book I would not be able to put it down! And it is very well written. I am looking forward to the next 33 chapters. Hopefully 34 by the time I get there. ;>
alana (Chapter 57) - Wed 09 Dec 2009
poor shippo lol
autumngold (Chapter 57) - Wed 09 Dec 2009
Thank you for the new chapter. I'm glad that Kagome and Sesshoumaru seem to be on the same page now concerning their life together and her education. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please post again soon!
Kanna37 (Chapter 57) - Wed 09 Dec 2009
LOL! Oh wow... I could do with some fantasies myself - unfortunately, mine always seem to degenerate into nightmares sooner or later. Nice chapter!
Amber
HA HA HA kuruo is going DOWN!!!! about time and nothing his father says can stop that they both deserve to get chocked with the stick up their ass sheesh
I really love the comment at the end of the chappie... it makes me wonder about arranged matings. Do they ever last? I can't wait to find out who the other members of the demon councils are and what punishment will be given to Kouro. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
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