This one shot was absolutely fantastic! I definitely loved the way Fluffy was in total agony of how to get that kiss from Kagome. It was definitely different. I especially enjoyed the very descriptive scene you laid out and I found it very enjoyable. However, I think it could have been better had there been a better setting. The language was not complicated nor confusing as to comprehension, but it was complicated and confusing considering the fact we didn't know the setting too well. And with a better setting you could have had so much more to write with and have painted a more vivid picture. As it is it's great, but that's pretty much the only thing I didn't totally like/enjoy about the story. Keep up the great work.

*Wandered quietly into the depths of your fanfic not knowing what to find, one of those one-shots where Kagome and Sesshoumaru are in love, and I don't have to read about the long winded road that got them to that point?* Hmmmmm...I didn't know if I would be use to it, but I loved it ^_^ I love it all, even the little touch of Sesshoumaru eventaully wanting more than a kiss not to make it too innocent for those like me who can never have enough, and for some reason I really enjoyed the passage about Sesshoumaru's fangs. I don't know why...like a faint echo that Sesshoumaru was still a powerful taiyoukai despite how we are seeing him in this light, and then of course the ultimate kicker......Kagome blurting out about how dangerous she assumed his kiss would be. I forgot all about that drool it's so nice of your plot bunny to remind us, and instead of Sesshoumaru just doing an long explanation of how it wouldn't hurt her, he just takes it...like Sesshoumaru does when he wants something. My only problem, which isn't even your fault and is Rumiko's fault, I don't like it when it keeps getting written 'This Sesshoumaru' I don't know why it annoys me....grrr Love it....and this is my very first Dokuga review ever, and for this review you get...dun dun dun dun....three fangirl smiley faces ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

nice one!!! it's really cute! i was sure it was gonna end up with something like bad breath lol quite creative i liked it a lot =)