sounds good so far, please update soon! Makes me wonder what's gonna happen next!
| I really loved this short story. It was sad yet beautifully written. I hope one day you might expand on it and make into a full blown story. As it stands now, it really does not need enhancments. Wonderful! *hugs and smiles*
| So sweet:) Totally liked the story, and have to agree with Knifethrower; it would be a great start for a long story. But anyway, great work!
Knifethrower (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Mar 2009
I sure wish this was not a one-shot. It would make an awesome first chapter. I loved it, but now I'm sad that there's not going to be more...
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