Haha, omg, this is hilarious, not to mention really well written. I give you writing props. 
      
Wow, I really like your writing, it's superb. And I'm glad you actually made Kagome afraid of Sesshoumaru for their first meeting, a lot of stories have her immediately trying to be best buds with him and I'm like, "uh...he tried to kill her. A lot. I'm pretty sure she would be just a little cautious." 
Anyway, good start! 
      
Okay, seriously, I'm about to certify myself a thirteenxwishes fangirl. I'm shellacked on this series like enamel on a Ming vase. Your detail is just as beautifully precise and delicate. My heart is pit-pattering with admiration right now... sigh... 
      
Yay! That's a sweet beginning for a new serial! I look forward to all those 'shards', and as always I love your writing! 
Just one question: how can this one be the 34th 'shard' when it's called the thirty shards... the mind boggles lol. 
Rin... she will be his downfall -evil giggle- 
Dewa mata 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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