when someone gives you so many chances to improve and change for the better and you don't, expectations of forgiveness should not be there to receive. inuyasha thought that kagome was a bottomles well of forgiveness, but when she proved him wrong, he should have known he wouldn't ge it. he hurt her so badly and almost broke her soul. just like this story shows: cut out those who hurt you and cause you pain. keep those who love you for who you are close. and remember only YOU can bring happiness into your life. i'm glad sesshoumaru saw her worth and showed her the emotions she needs to thrive. keep up the great writing. c'ya'
One of the best fanfic ever! I love how you made Kagome strong hearted and how great Sesshomaru did. I think Kagome is a very kind hearted girl but she is strong like in the story and not a victim like other viewed her to be. I love all your work Sarhea. Greaaatttt ones!
This was very good and I enjoyed reading
loved your story!
Hi Sarhea, as always I enjoyed reading one of your works.
I had a question, in chapter 2, you mentioned Sesshoumaru having harem but later in story you didn't mention about what happened to it after his mating to Kagome?! Did he remove the harem?
Loved it!!! Great story!!!
I love how cold Sango is in this one! She's just rubbing salt in Inuyasha's wounds lol
I liked that kagom didn't forgive inuyasha. It would have been out of her character in this story and I fell that a lot of stories forgive inuyasha a little to quickly sometimes.
Overall I liked the story, the characters and the plot line. thank you for this :)
Upon finishing this I was happy someone didn't make her forgive Inu-Yasha. He doesn't deserve her forgiveness. The filth treated her like she was second rate to a walking clay pot. No offense but his clay pot was alive thanks to Kagome. Inu-yasha got his just desserts. He made his bed and whether or not he wanted to lie in it had nothing to do with her. She had a piece of her soul taken from her to make sure Kikyo could be up and moving around. Too bad she was less than what was expected lol. Over all great story though.
I like your version of Kagome. Her easy forgiveness of Inu's stupidity has always bothered me...
Love, love, love it. One of the best portrayal of Kagome and Sesshamuru. I would have been royally pist if she had forgiven Inyuasha.
Sooo cute I appreciate te notice at they top off the last chapter bout her kids age it kinda give mean idea on the timeline skip.
I really liked how Kagome's personality came out with all the betrayls and deceit from Inuyasha. I honestly thought the anime series ended sucky because Inuyasha had no consequence from all the betrayls, lies, deceits, and stupidity. I enjoyed this story and the flashbacks were awesome. Really liked how Kagome gave what Kikyo and Inuyasha deserved though I think in some way Kagome should forgive Inuyasha just so she didn't have the anger, hurt, and pain in her heart. I think I agree with her having just ice cold disdain for Inuyasha.
This was very, very good. I'm okay with the ending, and the way Kagome acted toward Inuyasha and Kikyo. All in all it was a great story.
I love Sesshoumaru :] I just want to hug him!
I am in absolute love with this. And this chapter was definately interesting, but I liked it :]
Yay! A fic that doesn't make Kagome forgive the idiot! Just for that, this is in my favorites bookmark. Sequel? Please?
Short to the point and rather nice, I like the plot as well, the only problem would have to be how short it is. It was also quite nice with ouw you portrayed them and made it see more 'real', another small probles I personally had with it was the time, like just how meny years had passed from Kagome mateing to Inuyasha visiting, all was given was vauge and we has to guess.
despite these things I really and truly enjoyed the story, the plot was awesome. Keep wrighting <3
A very well written story. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Very good! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
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