Very good. I look forward to your updates. Keep an eye on spelling though. ;). But it's very good. ^_^

Congratulations on your success in the 2nd quarter 2009 Dokuga Awards. Guess what? Now you have to update! (Yes, there is a rule about that. I just know there is. Or perhaps just wishful thinking... Oh well, please, please please update, because I want more!)

the bright ideas is there, and really enjoy reading it too, but would loved it even more if you may note every 'happening' in author note earlier on or at end chapter... don't get me wrong, just a note.. anyway, still i love your fic, by the way, may i have your e-mail? you may contact me at sunsetinlove79@gmail.com