The whole plot was really creative and i loved that... The only critic i have is that the whole 'kags doesn't use a condom with strangers' was a big NOPE for me. I know this is only a story but i couldn't help but think about the diseases they could be getting from this 

Wow I"m impressed i've been in the scene for a while and to read a fan fic about kink is absolutly amazing.  your writing style and the way you have everything is perfect so true to the scene.  I love how you write kink. 

Penelope

Sizzling erotic sadomasochism at its finest. Brillant written, your great! Thanks so much for sharing this.