Reviews for Wrong Number by Oroyukae

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katlady (Chapter 38) - Thu 12 Mar 2009

WTF  WAS THAT  NO  FAIR  LEAVNIG  A CLIFFY  LIKE  THAT  AND  RIGHT BE FOR A CON TOO...I DEMAND AN UP DATE ASAP


Sessygurl (Chapter 38) - Mon 02 Mar 2009
Wow!Thanks for the wild ride. I will be patiently waiting for the sequel.

Tana_san (Chapter 38) - Mon 02 Mar 2009
I have been reading this fic from the start and I have loved every moment of it. You are a very talented writer and you deserve any recognition you get for this piece. I have to say though that you didn't seem to me to be heading for the ending of this. After Sesshoumaru and Kagome got together and she was kidnapped and on the brink of death, you took us into a realm where Kagome and Sesshoumaru's future daughter spoke to both parent's of Kagome's need to realize her power's potential and accept herself for who and what she is.(a good move) More trouble after her near death experience occcurred and they finally got that righted to have their "honeymoon" interrupted (a really good move toward drama and action) and then having it left at Kagome taking a pill since the kidnapping and withholding that from Sesshoumaru and using it as the end. To me, that sounds like a gigantic cliffhanger and not an ending, especially if you may not write a sequel to this. I'm sure I'm not the only one to think that I missed something where Kagome is taking pills that Sesshoumaru might not approve of. Either this should not have been addressed giving it a more appropriate ending or a promise of a sequel to give us a reason to understand this ending. I hope I haven't offended you as this was never my intent but I honestly feel that this fantastic fanfiction deserves a better ending. JEN

knifethrower (Chapter 38) - Sun 01 Mar 2009

Love the ending, since it seems like a sequel might be in the works...  Keeping my fingers crossed!


Anggie (Chapter 38) - Sun 01 Mar 2009
BRAVO! As sad as I am to see this fic come to a close I really enjoyed reading it. You a truly a talented a creative writer and I hope you continue. Thank you for the wonderful fic and hours of entertainment!

Sakura (Chapter 38) - Sun 01 Mar 2009

I love this story, the plot is wonderfully written and the way you used the characters makes me believe that's how the anime went. However, the way you left the last chapter doesn't seem like an ending with a potential of a sequel. It seems like it is just a chapter with a humungous cliffhanger.  In my pov, there's a difference. I'm not sure if you've noticed, but I felt that the story dwindled down a path away from the plot. The title is based on the plot, if I'm correct, and the way it was continued after Sesshoumaru won over Kagome, it seemed like a good time to end the story. I hope I'm not hurting your feelings, but I just have this feeling that it could be in three parts..Wrong Numbers, Games We Play, and the sequel sequel....


Ladyfairy (Chapter 38) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
thats it ohhh not cool now im confuzed i think i missed something what is she guilty about and what is she taking in the end? you cant leave it there thats sooo uncool.....i would settle for two chaps also please just a few more breadcrums for us....

Dominik Journot (Chapter 38) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
But the 38th wasn't the last chapter, right???? Please don't end the fic like that! There'll be at least 2 more chapters, right? At least a 39th and a 40th? OMG, I'm feeling rather lonely now!!!!

Dani (Chapter 37) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
YAY! I knew they would get him. I just wish Sess could have ripped him to pieces while he was alive. Is this the end?

Sessygurl (Chapter 37) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
Wow, definately did not see that coming! You keep us guessing, I love it!

Sessygurl (Chapter 36) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
You go Kagome!!! Out a fire in their asses!!! I love this story so much!

Dominik Journot (Chapter 37) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
That was simply magnificent! Great beyond words! Congrats!

Anggie (Chapter 37) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
Well damn, I don't blame Yamomoto for killing himself, but I was kinda looking forward to him being tortured. Oh well at least now there will be a happy chapter next...right?

sunset in love (Chapter 37) - Fri 27 Feb 2009
at last!!!! take that yamamoto, uh, honestly i'm getting mean! anyway, is this the end? please let them at least have a happy ending, poor Yuri, i would love to let yamamoto to fall down on the cliff, into aligators or shark infested water or fell onto snake hole... yeah, that still won't make up for the crime he committed against all, especially Yuri!

WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 36) - Fri 27 Feb 2009

Now this is getting very intense! I wonder if Sesshou's daughter is able to interfere cuz she has the power to go back in time? I hope Yamamoto gets what he deserves... *Evil grin* I can only hope that Kagome has her turn at the guy who caused her miscarriage. Keep up the amazing work and update soon...  :P


Lumiere (Chapter 36) - Fri 27 Feb 2009

that was very interesting......i was not expecting that.....

cant wait to see what Sesshou will do about Kagome's powers, there child and all that...

*kiss*hug*kiss*


Dani (Chapter 36) - Fri 27 Feb 2009
WHAT! Don't do it? Sess you better kick his ass and then some. Maybe Kagome should do it-torture him. Make him pay for hurting my beloved. Well, I anxiously await to see what happens next.

Bell (Chapter 36) - Fri 27 Feb 2009
OOOOO I love it, time for kagome to get her vengance!! Waiting anxiously for next chapter......

knifethrower (Chapter 36) - Fri 27 Feb 2009

Wow, the action and suspense aspects of this story are excellent.  I also love the way you introduced Kagome and Sesshomaru's daughter into the plot.  I can't wait for more!


knifethrower (Chapter 35) - Fri 27 Feb 2009

Do I keep saying this?  This was the best chapter yet!


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