oh no, you mean Ah-Un is (are) really dead? I was holding out hope that he (they) were just injured, until I read your author's note. (still secretly in denial and crossing my fingers). as always, I delight in your intricate plotline and nicely flowing prose; I just can't get enough of this story (so I'm loving the unexpectedly frequent updates recently)
xokaggyfanox (Chapter 40) - Fri 15 Jan 2010
phew thnk god that was just a dream for i second i was like noooooooo kagome. but then i realized she was kidnapped lol. as this chapter as a whole i loved it. sesshoumaru's reaction to the nightmare was cute. but the omen was bad, this is very bad sesshoumaru needs to find out whats going on nd quick. although it was a short chapter. i love this story enough not to care and it adds more to the cliff hanger bc there was no relief on kagome's side i've already drawen a few pictures and i cn't wait to upload them so you can see them :)
You write so well, it makes me cry. Literally.
I can't wait until Sesshoumaru goes to rescue her. Which is what I'm assuming will happen although it would be nice to see Kagome save her own ass as well lol.
Ah well. Keep up the great work and please update soon =D
-CosmicAnomaly
That was amazing!! OMG I can't wait to see what happens next!? Like who has Kagome? :D I can't wait to see!! Keep up the amazing work!! Update when you can!! :D
zebbeed (Chapter 39) - Wed 13 Jan 2010
it is not my habit to rite to the author and presume to give remarks about a story. the story must unfold as seen by its originator. it is for the reader to enjoy the tale or to forget it in favor of another. but i admitt that i have enjoyed the spin of this story. i do morn that a beast so nobel as ah-un is hurt. your long silence at the mid-piont of this tale and the flurry of additional chapters have kept me very busy. please do continue this story which i hope to have an ending that i can look forward to, with pleasure. and if Lord Sesshoumaru does not need the gold, perhaps he will buy the freedom of the hapless girls forced into slavery. to be Geisha.
Saide (Chapter 39) - Wed 13 Jan 2010
I felt the tension here. Just made me real all sad inside. And the end part of this chapter, I got so all obsessed that I got to draw myself what Sesshoumaru's portrait looked like. >.<;;;
http://dokuga.com/gallery?func=detail&id=2296
This here's the link. Hope you like it. ^^;;
>.< i could cry ; _ ;
poor sesshoumaru, poor kagome seems it's getting interesting here...i wonder who could have attact kagome...i hope ah-un is well...or at least not dead : /
i think i do not need to tell you that i really really wish for a fast update *lol*
GL with the contest C:
Miju (Chapter 39) - Tue 12 Jan 2010
You don't know how happy i am when there's a new post! =D
wow, nice cliffy u left us with...somehow I have feeling it will be a while before the two are back together....well, hopefully im wrong teehee!
Sprinks (Chapter 39) - Tue 12 Jan 2010
you were right to believe that i may kill you!!
EPIC CLIFF HANGER!
UPDATE ASAP! ><!
xoxoxox much love
sprinks.
I for one definitely think there should be a contest.
I mean, what kind of artist wouldn't want to draw something of this beauty?
One vote yes from me <3 Once again, I love this story <333
Ps Poor Ah-Un. I love that dragon.
Nice plot twist MissTeak. Hugs and smiles :)
Oh my! Poor poor AhUhn!... Who is the bad man? I can't wait to find out! I hope Sesshomaru doesn't ignore his gut feeling!
Shae (Chapter 39) - Tue 12 Jan 2010
Ohoho, warrior boots, booming voice and animal stench, could it be... Kumano? :D I wonder if he (if it is indeed him) is working on his own, with the jewel thief, or if he IS the jewel thief (though I didn't think him stealthy or smart enough). Either way if it is him he now knows that she is the priestess who guards the jewel (either he found out through eavesdropping or someone else), if it isn't him then I guess it could be our jewel thief. Or, it may be someone else entirely ^^; And it seems that Kagome was intending to return to the Geisha house and continue on like normal, though now who knows where she'll end up. Ahhh, I hope Ah-Un is okaayyy, I thought for a moment that she was even going to jump off when she figured out that she was the one who the attacker wanted.
miwa03 (Chapter 39) - Tue 12 Jan 2010
Waaah! What an unexpected turn! Amazing job Teak! ... as always :)
But who could that be? Could it be the youkai bear from the first chapter? suspense..suspense..
Ah-Un! No! Haha I have a question, the dragon's name is Ah-Un or Ah-Uh cause i wrote it on my story but
dont rememebr which one I used...thats so sad...hmmm
Random Kitten (Chapter 39) - Tue 12 Jan 2010
T-T will the cliff hangers never end!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!
Btw i love your story it is the only one that i hav reread again becuz i lost my place and i still held my breath with every chapter... ur use of language i belive is wonderful :D ur story keeps me on edge i cant see if kagome and shesshoumaru are going to be together, friends, or jus distant. i love that about ur story! :) i cant wait for ur nxt chapter
*offers a cute shesshy plushie to make Miss Teak update faster*
Samantha (Chapter 39) - Tue 12 Jan 2010
Oh wow this getting amazing! I can't wait until Sesshoumaru finds out what has occured! Please update sooon! I can't wait to see whats happens! I know you have updated a lot lately I appericate it as does everyone else here! Thanks for writing such a awesome story!
I think that if you don't post chapter 40 soon, i will implode!!!!
Ooh, I like the painting anology, very unique! I love omens, they always make people feel so much worse when they find out about the actual event. Please, get Sesshoumaru's butt in gear so that he can forgive her. Granted, it would take forever because she did mess it up royally, but they need to get over themselves and quickly.
very good chapter but who has captured poor Kagome. And Sesshou doen't even realize that he just might have sent her off to her death. will he heed the omen? prolly not till its almost too late or after a few more omens or sumthin cause he is like that.
so good cant wait for the next one
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