:) I like this one! I really like how you captured Jaken. Brings me back to the early episodes when he was more vocal and less grovelish (if that's even a word, lol). Good job!

nicely original in how the confetti got burned! and there were very few errors, so great job! .. Maru

Okay, well, Kagome didn't get eaten in this one. (sorry! that's all i think about when I see your name now) This was a good one. Not a lot of errors and a good read!

Nicely done! This was well written and enjoyable to read. Kagome should know better than to startle Jaken... A Karma point shall be yours for setting fire to the confetti!