Well that was humiliating for Kagome. Well written.
This is a great insight into the world that is Sesshoumaru. I know on this site we want Sess and Kag to be in a relationship, but I think this little work of fiction greatly describes how he would be an older brother figure as well. 
Characterization besides, I have to applaud the fact that you got 800 words exactly. There's no way I could ever do that! 
      
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Dec 2008 
OMG, i love the way you interpreted it! THis fic was beautifully done, funny. ANd the description awesome. You are an amazing writer! I am actually going to go to your profile after this and see if you have more. Great job! 
      
Jupe (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Dec 2008 
Oooh!  It was cute and funny and bittersweet all at once, reading in almost a painfully poetic fashion.  Lovely characterizations, excellent dialogue, and true-to-life actions.  (I, too, have spun flowers between my fingers until they blurred) 
      
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Dec 2008 
Oh I loved this!  You have his character down, hers too!  Very nice take on this challenge!  Karma for you! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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