I like the way it's going so far *whispers* I'm a BIG Twilight fan too* Some grammar errors but nothing a good beta can'y fix!

~CR~

I was really looking forward to reading a good twilight/inuyasha crossover. Your story idea seems pretty solid... but your grammar needs a lot of work. You may want to look into getting a word program with spell check. I'd also recommend getting a beta reader to help you out. Nice idea, please keep it up! -Maru

I think your story would be positively lovely to read, but your..."paragraphs"...are nothing but long, run-on sentences. There's no puncuation until you get to the last word. I don't know about anyone else, but it's not very enjoyable to read one long sentence. Is there any way you can fix that?

ITS REALLY......REALLYYY.REALLLY.....GOOD!!!lol i love how u mixed in twilight nd kagome/sesshoumaru.im a big fan of twilight so i hope u do great in this story.u should keep writin because i know this story is goin 2 be the best!lmao=)=]