This is an absolute delight of a story! You're writing is very enjoyable to read as the characters interactions are so smooth and natural. I really appreciate the subtle dynamics that are bringing kagome and sesshoumaru closer together. I appreciate the way that you're building up their relationship and all the little moments they're having together. I think your portrayal of seshomaru and kagome is excellent and very nuanced.
I also really appreciate the storyline itself as I'm really curious what's going on to have the well acting as it is and now with this last chapter, where being where Kikyo was resurrected. I don't think I've ever seen this concept before so I'm really intrigued.
I look forward to your continued updates! Thanks for all your writing.
Oh that's not good! I love how Ah-Un is so protective of her.
Dun dun dun oh shit..... Gotta get Kagome away before its to late.
Interestinggg! He's down lol
But if she were totally honest we wouldn't have this drama and slow burn. Lovely chapter.
So curious I wonder what Sesshomaru is trying to get Kagome to say or do? What could he be thinking I wonder.
I hope she finds out soon. LOLOLOL or she might just sizzle everyone in frustration. At least she can take her test now. If she can concentrate on it.
Love when he helps her! Just ask him to train you girl!
Sess2023 (Chapter 8) - Fri 04 Aug 2023
Great read :-)
Hopefully, they will find some clues soon.
Akuryo (Chapter 7) - Tue 27 Jun 2023
Are they kidnapping mikos? Maybe to build a dark mill army? Interesting read so far, keep it up!
As always, your chapters are wonderful and leave us wanting more.
Aww how kind of him
Nice chapter. Little progress but I'll bet he gives a great massage. LOL
Oh wow bandits leave it to Kagome not wanting to shed blood but at least they defeated them without causing harm to one of them. And Sesshomaru getting close with Kagome like that just sparked an interest in her..... Wonder what will happen next.
Update soon!!!
Now he is involved. At least he knows they have done everything they could to find her. Can't wait to find out more.
Even Sesshomaru is at a loss.... I wonder just who decided to take Rin and why...
Poor Rin!
Straight to it
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