This is amazing! Looking forward to what comes next. : )
So much for that. Inuyasha, sticking his nose in and trying to be helpful is just complicating things. Silly Dog Boy. And now, of course, Sesshomaru is conflicted and overthinking his obvious non-prejudice. Hoping Kagome doesn't spiral into overthinking and not communicating. And still the assassins are running around. What a mess.
Seems Inu Yasha gave Sesshomaru word for thought now even he can't seem to figure out what is truth to the matter Kagome is she someone important to him or just another body. Hopefully Kagome won't feel rejected for his dick move but its better to be safe than not.
Lauren (Chapter 8) - Sun 04 Dec 2022
Well, that was abrupt. LOL Sesshomaru clearly felt moved by the declaration to help him get revenge. That's sweet. But at least they're making progress. Here's hoping they aren't interrupted
Oh man now I get it... lol that was a great chapter finally got somewhere and Kagome and Sesshomaru will at least do what they want. I'm down with that....
Oooh I'm loving this and the sexual tension, teasing and revelations. Excited for more <3
Lauren (Chapter 7) - Tue 29 Nov 2022
This was a very sweet chapter, even when you take the end into account. That jealousy should've told him something after all. Loving this fuc do far. Can't wait until the next chapter and the continuation of the mystery
Lauren (Chapter 6) - Tue 29 Nov 2022
Development! This is interesting. So maybe Sesshomaru isn't as clueless as he seemed? Is he only joking? Is he kind of delirious? Has the blood loss made him playful? So many questions.
Lauren (Chapter 5) - Tue 29 Nov 2022
Well that took a turn. So Kagome has a crush, Rin and Kohaku are married, and Inuyasha is still protecting the village. Wonder why he hasn't gotten married yet. Or if Sango and Miroku have been alerted to the danger from their village
Lauren (Chapter 4) - Tue 29 Nov 2022
Well, at least he's getting clean. I'm wondering what was said to the soldiers for them to leave, though. Or did Kagome just glare her powers and they turned tail? And where are Jaken and Ah In??? With Rin?
Lauren (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Nov 2022
This is interesting. What happened? When did the events of this nightmare take place? Were the circumstances surrounding it why he's hurt? Was it a coup?
Amazing ??
Such a great chapter Sesshomaru learning things about Kagome and what she does or how wall of pictures came about. It was a touching scene and Inu Yasha helped Kagome gain it.
Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Sat 26 Nov 2022
Kag se fuerte!
No quiero que ella asuma que el se quedó con la foto porque tenga interés en ella. Quiero que piense que él se la quedó como evidencia de existencia de este lugar Tokio del que ella viene.
El todavía rechaza la idea de estar con un simple humano y no quiere parecerse a su padre.
Ladydot (Chapter 6) - Wed 16 Nov 2022
Beautiful chapter. I'm really curious to see what Jaken finds and how our favorite trio deals with it!
Wow, really fun scene with the pipe!
I love how you've written Inuyasha and written him in Kagome's life. You can tell they are best friends and just best friends.
Doing great!
Great plot, great character writing.
oOoOO spicy Kagome!
This is really good. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Very interesting story and looking forward to more chapters.
Nicely written and creative. Please keep it going.
Cheers :)
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