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hw (Chapter 10) - Wed 15 Feb 2023

I'm so excited to see where this story goes and how Sesshoumaru courts Kagome! It's fun seeing how he adapts to her and discovers things about himself as well. Will Kagome realize that he's serious about being with her or will it take a lot of effort on his part to make her see and let go of her insecurities? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Anonymous (Chapter 9) - Wed 08 Feb 2023

Allot of info, let's see where it goes. Ms. Higurashis hesitation, heartbreak or stalker. Boss man in love or intrigued what will happen next can't wait please update soon......

KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Wed 08 Feb 2023

Such a wonderful chapter. I loved Bokuseno humanoid character. It's how I would picture him. I also liked the way you have marked them. 

Jennifer (Chapter 8) - Wed 01 Feb 2023

The question marks in my 1st comment were hearts, lol. <3<3<3<3<3

Jennifer (Chapter 8) - Wed 01 Feb 2023

????????????????????? that ending was amazing! Something right indeed!!! Please update again soon!!!!

Sess2023 (Chapter 8) - Tue 31 Jan 2023

Wonderful story! You stay true to the character's personalities while having an original and creative plot - great work! Please continue!

Kathy (Chapter 8) - Thu 26 Jan 2023

I really like the story, i don't think we need constant reminder that Kagome accepts everyone for who they are and not their blood. Like one time is enough. 

There is also a lot of repetition through the story, like the same events, i guess you're doing different POV but it just feels like constant repetition when saying it once form a this person view could be enough and then the chapter can be spend on more time developing the characters and their relationship. 

Same with mentioning Naraku and how bad he is, we got it from the first time each character said it. There is no need to constantly bring it up. 

Just some suggestions to help the story flow more. The story is very good

Madam_CocoNut (Chapter 8) - Tue 24 Jan 2023

Oooo can't wait for more :) 

Anonymous (Chapter 8) - Mon 23 Jan 2023

Me pregunto, qué pensaría Lord Sesshy si viera a Hojo ( ese niño asustadizo ) babeandose por la señorita Higurashi?

Marie (Chapter 8) - Mon 23 Jan 2023

Bravo, great job.  Encode! Soon please!!!

REDWOLF (Chapter 8) - Mon 23 Jan 2023

Awww how beautiful!

KShadeslady (Chapter 8) - Sun 22 Jan 2023

Woohoo!! That was an awesome chapter! That fight scene was wild! Well their yoki and reiki know what's up even if they don't. 

sesskag493 (Chapter 8) - Sun 22 Jan 2023

The build-up of this chapter was AMAZING....pls update soon 

REDWOLF (Chapter 7) - Wed 18 Jan 2023

This should be interesting! I wonder how long it will take to burn him?

Jasmine (Chapter 7) - Tue 17 Jan 2023

Loving this story! I really hope she wins and he has to figure out another way. Or at least tie so he's even more impressed. Do right by Kagome lol

Yasmine (Chapter 7) - Tue 17 Jan 2023

You are killing me softly with this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter! 

Jennifer (Chapter 7) - Tue 17 Jan 2023

I absolutely loved this chapter! The challenge initiated by Kagome is my favorite part! Idk how you plan to go feom there, but I am begging you to have Kagome kick his ass off his pedestal and make him the one to fall for her. Can't wait for the next update!!

KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Tue 17 Jan 2023

LOLOLOL ! Wow! Talk about a deal with the devil! I loved this cat and mouse chapter. It was great! Thank you!

Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Mon 16 Jan 2023

Pobre mi niña! Esa apuesta ella  ya la perdió.

Buttercream (Chapter 7) - Mon 16 Jan 2023

I'm so glad that Kagome apologized by deceiving Sesshomaru  Cannot wait until they start dating each other.

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