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Jessie (Chapter 7) - Wed 10 Aug 2022

Omg yes!!! Sooo totally wanting to read more!!! This story is awesome ????


Jessie (Chapter 5) - Wed 10 Aug 2022

So beautifully written ???? I love it and hope to read more soon 


Allison (Chapter 7) - Tue 14 Jun 2022

Not gonna lie. I hope this story gets darker. I mean not crazy like I'll be traumatized (my imagination is pretty vivid) but like right on the cusp of written enlightenment. It's been a while since I've been on dokuga, so I clearly missed some things, but whoever you are, I'm glad you're writing. So far your stories have been magnificent in their world-building and character development. Akin to wonderbug and a few others of notable reputation on... well, any and all forums. I've been around the block a few times... circa 2005. You have definitely caught my attention with detail and historical accuracy. I'm in awe. I think darker stories showing humanity's triumphs and failures tend to be the best, and so this I am hoping to see the extent of your writing. I don't even remember if I can favorite or follow your stories, but if I could I would 100x over. Can't wait to see where this goes next. Also, I am SoooooooOOO hoping Kazuhiko gets the girl, cuz I'm always rooting for the underdog. No pun intended.


Young Kagome (Chapter 7) - Thu 12 May 2022

Bit of a dark chapter. I will also check out your story on the other site! Please update soon! 


SmilingFool (Chapter 7) - Mon 18 Apr 2022

This story is by far my favorite I love reading about the yokai realm and I am wondering as well how did Kagome get there?  I just might have to go back and read from the beginning unless you haven't mentioned that part yet.  Who would be killing the young are they kidnapped from the yokai realm?  Please update soon I cannot get enough of this story.

 

As for pink moon observatory well I don't like how the web pages are viewed or how the lay of the story or chapter is...  It no where near readable, clickable or arrow pointing as Dokuga and AO3 hopefully they fix some of their content so it not all smashed together.  Its how I see it.


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Sat 16 Apr 2022

Poor Shori, she doesn't seem very happy about this at all. I'm guessing no one has ever asked her what she would like. A courtesy that her brother extended to those who traveled with him. There was a lot going on in this chapter. Typical of males of the time, he would restrict her pet and then made a sideways slam at Sesshomaru for allowing her to have it. Yep, she doesn't like him at all...for all his handsome facade. And, I had wondered if she had feelings for Kazuhiko. Will her brother allow her to " do as she pleases"? Wonderful chapter! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Sat 16 Apr 2022

I should have read a few more chapters before commenting on Shori's lack of training. She can obvious hunt for her "pet" LOL! He was impressive. I don't think he will like Lord Ryuji at all. I love that you used the Korean hanbok. I was assigned to Seoul for a year and fell in love with these beautiful traditional outfits. They are the most beautiful colors. I recognized them from your very detailed descriptions. I hope that Sesshomaru is going to bring Shippo home with him. Kagome would love to see him again. I'm surprised he didn't leave with her. It's interesting that Inuyasha asks after Kagome when he sees Sessh. I so enjoyed this chapter, especially their drinking session. Like your other stories, this is beautifully written. 


Elle Jene (Chapter 6) - Tue 29 Mar 2022

I absolutely adore this story m. Excellent details and dialogue! 


Steph (Chapter 6) - Tue 29 Mar 2022

Wow,  fantastic job. Your writing is strong, detailed, and full of imagery. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Mon 28 Mar 2022

Can't believe he hasn't taught her to protect herself. Her mother is a powerful demoness and she didn't insist? Wow! The days with Kagome will be interesting. They are both "birds in a gilded cage". Kindred souls perhaps? 


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Mon 28 Mar 2022

Kagome has indeed, grown up. Nice chapter. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Mar 2022

Well, this should be fun. 


SmilingFool (Chapter 6) - Sun 27 Mar 2022

Oh man that was going sweet until the dragon opened his mouth about Sesshomaru....  Wonder if the dragon planned to do more than give Shiori a ride?  Wonder what Kagome thinks....  until next time.


hw (Chapter 6) - Sun 27 Mar 2022

This story has become one of my favorites. Getting the notification that there was a new chapter was a wonderful and welcome surprise today. I wonder what the fallout will be from Lord Ryuji and Shori's mishap? Will Sesshoumaru confront him? And what happened to the pendant ripped from Shori's outfit? So many questions! :) 

I'm really curious about Lord Ryuji and his real intentions...part of me suspects that he may be out for family revenge (for his uncle and also for his cancelled appointment with Kagome) but another part of me thinks he's sincerely interested in Shori despite the family history. 

Can't wait for more! Please update soon!


REDWOLF (Chapter 6) - Sun 27 Mar 2022

I wonder how ????  Sesshoumaru will find out? Great chapter!


Young Kagome (Chapter 6) - Sun 27 Mar 2022

Hm. It's nice that he's listening to her. I wish Kagome & Sh?ri were closer that she felt she could talk to her. Very slow paced but I'm fairly patient. Please update soon! 


KidWasabi (Chapter 5) - Sat 19 Feb 2022

Excited for the next chapters!$


Chrissy (Chapter 5) - Thu 17 Feb 2022

Incredibly written chapter! I've been looking forward to each chapter as they come out. Your writing is delightful, just the right place, the right amount of intrigue. Perfect descriptions of non verbal interaction and dialogue! I love this story and every chapter puts me in the universe you've created. 

 

I love this storyline. It's so fresh and there have been a few things I've not been expecting at all! Delightful. 

 

I can't wait for the next chapter. 


Dori (Chapter 5) - Tue 15 Feb 2022

Ohhh I've enjoyed this so far. Keep it up~~ 


Honeyque28 (Chapter 5) - Mon 14 Feb 2022

Are you trying to say Kagome can only breed pure pups?

Inuyasha is half so if she got kinocked up by Sesshoumaru well then she won't be barren then.

Stay safe and great story.


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