Please please please update!! Great story!
Oh wow that was a great chapter loved it...
That was good poor Toga got to hand it to him he's a good father. LOL loved this chapter and little Rin... So adorable.
This is such an amazing idea and I really like how you're making it come alive! I'm craving more and more and more ????
"TAP ME IN." ...I honestly don't think I would have waited to be tapped in, but I would be Kagome in that situation..... I actually was in a similar situation. Some ass said something to my mom and I punched him in the face...
Oh that was good you just gave Kagome the opening she needed to protect herself from the hazings... Sesshomaru... Once Kagome explains he'll be reluctant to help but does so anyway learning more about her and protects her from her mortal enemy Kikyo and the whoreleaders. Loved the chapter can't wait to read more.
I see now what you meant by intending to maybe write this as a crack fic. Sesshomaru's inner monologue at the begining was funny :) And of course, he'll do anything for Rin!
Wow poor Kagome I was thinking they'd do more than scold and bring up her short comings Hazings never been fond of them and never got envolved Kagome and the others should have the same thinking but then again Kagome's always nieve or just being a teen. anyways the boys forgot why they were at the mall can't wait to see what happens with that wonder what Sango and Kagome have to do to get the mall cops from arresting the boys.. Wonder what Sesshomaru will do? Will he ask for them to use the shrine or find something on his own. Wonder how he feels about Bankotsu checking out Kagome there are some protective instincts there. Can't wait to see what happens hopefully Kagome puts her foot down on the hazing hate to see what Kikyo will do to her.
I like what I've read of this story so far, enough that when you do update, I'll be clicking on the chapter to read it. I really like all of the interactions between the characters so far, specifically, the way you've characterized their relationships and shown the closeness between Inuyasha and Kagome, and so on.
A part of me wishes that some of that closeness was elaborated on. How did Kagome and Inuyasha's friendship grow? What was Kagome's first meeting with Sesshomaru like? Etc. Etc.
Anyway, good work, I'll keep an eye out for an update!
Cute Kid Kagome! I love this! I can't wait to see what else this story has in store!
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