You need to write more... this is so good. its too short for  an amazing storyline. 

Excellant read. I omly wish for more.

I've read this thrice already and I'm still hoping for more. I'm a fan. ????????

Okay you've got me hooked, lined, and I'm sinking fast for more to read....  I enjoyed your take on this story something new and refreshing.  Update soon.

Hi, me again. I would really enjoy a full lenght story with these characters. Its criminally short and I am sure there could be such a fun, action packed romance hiding behind these couple thousand words... I would love to see it!

Gah!!! What an amazing oneshot that really needs to be a two shot or an entire chapter story. 

I liked it very much will you be adding more to the story?

I really enjoyed this story! Hope to see more!

Ooooohhhh!  Good start...I hope you make this into a series?  You MUST make thus a series!  Update soon!

Please do not stop here.   Wow someone had captured Lord Sesshomaru and Kagome saves him.  Love it.