I really like the last line. How long will Kagome pine for an imaginary prince before she starts to want the real one? I would love to see where you take this story. I am picturing her blushing discomfort the next time he shows up to visit Rin.
Oh my god!! Sesshomaru and and and and.... Kaede??!? I think I... I... I dunno how I feel about that, haha! I mean... that lucky old bat, is all I'll say! Hopefully Kaede will shed some light because I'm dead over here, hahaha! Love your writing! Please update soon.
Sweet lord! (Pun intended) that was amazing and I hope there is another chapter. :) :D
Luis (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Nov 2020
Oh thats good. Loved that twist, and i hope you plan to add more if only one offs.
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