Oh man I'm addicted to this story. Please more soon. I love that Sesshy couldn't hold back with Danske. Ugh Mooooreee
All of the chapters have been amazing so far, but holy shit, this was the best chapter yet!
So much feeling, just a general sense of realness. I'm so excited for the next chapter.
Wheepup (Chapter 9) - Thu 17 Dec 2020
not much to say other than I am madly in love with this story and your writing. I rarely enjoy modern era stories but this is really hitting the spot. I am just dying for him to reveal himself to her!
Delcena (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Dec 2020
Manic laughter at the beautiful tension you have built amongst the characters. I cannot wait to see where you decide to take the next chapter.
Oh my poor Sesshomaru he nearly had her and then he comes well Dansuke got what Sesshomaru had enough of and told him straight now only if Kagome would use her powers to see Sesshomaru behind the mask he made for himself..... Oh this was a delightful chapter.....
Mecca (Chapter 9) - Wed 16 Dec 2020
This is the best chapter so far!! Ahh I'm so glad they finally kissed! That scene where Sess deals ol' milk toast Danske some facts, it was perfection. I love the detail that he could smell her release, then her confession at listening to his podcast! Oh Lordy I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm checking every day for an update <3
Stupid little digger! Almost got ate by a demon didn't he? LMAO! Don't know if there was such a drink before , but brewmaster at my pub accidently added choclate to a blonde one time. It was fantastic! I think that's what Kags has been drinking. No offense if any y'all are blonde.;D
Sooooo close!!!! Omg that chapter was INTENSE!!!!! i need sooooo much more, you are magnificent!!!
Alashia (Chapter 8) - Tue 08 Dec 2020
OMG! I can't wait for the next update! I'm definitely in love with this story. Keep up the good work.
Qué pasará!?!?!? :oooooo
LMFAO! That little slip was fantastic! Your writing lemons as Sesshomaru. How freaking cool is that?? Love it!
Ohhh, myy this chapter was full of tension. I love that he almost slipped! Goodness incant wait til she finds out. She is making the connections but nott quiteee theree. I wonder at her reaction.
DAAAAYYYYMNNN ! almost gave himself away!
ahhh I can't wait for her to find him out
So Sess...Shoma is a writer. And an artist as well? Another dot to connect? Did she figure it out?? Come on Kagome! You just fought demons in a slayer stronghold from the fuedal era! Look at who is right before your eyes girl!! I wonder how she's going to react when she realizes? Can't wait for more!!
Mecca (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Dec 2020
I haven't got any criticism but that you gotta stop with the whole suspense thing (just kidding but not really) xD I can imagine Kagome is gonna be way more pissed the longer he doesn't tell her who he is simply because she's been alone this whole time (Not as long as Sess but still). And who is the artist??!? I'm dying to know!
Ohhhh! I feel like a slight reveal is coming not the big one buttt definitely something!! I LOVED THIS chapter! I cant wait to see what is next
that was a great chapter loved the reaction Kagome had to the library and the paintings of Jakken and Rin... Can't wait to read more.
Really liking Sess as a tease! And his little happy ending on phone was outrageous! So funny! Wake up Kagome! Connect that smooth baritone from podcast to Shoma. How much further will it be to connect Shoma with past adventure? Up to Sess I guess but Digger is on his wayyyyy OUT!!!!!
Mecca (Chapter 6) - Thu 26 Nov 2020
Ah these were amazing updates! I loved their back and forth on the phone - I so can't wait until she figure out who Shoma really is! That Danske is so milk toast compared to Sesshoumaru lol but I'm kinda glad to see that Kagome doesn't immediately fly into Shoma's big, strong arms haha xD thank you for two updates!! Definitely welcome as many as you would gift us <3
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