:D help the young master get the girl! Scheme away!! 

Ah Un having a tantrum. LOL hahaha

that's right, put all four clawed feet down, girl!! 

Awwwwwwwww! Yes! Work those words VS! You are KILLING IT! 

<3 Love this so much!!

djhgdhgfg I'm just dieing here. VS you're so good at these snippets. 

HA! 

"If he refused to take her to the human girl she would refuse to take another step." 

I just love how Ah Un can practically flick him in the nose and get away with it. Fabulous. 

<3 You are so awesome <3

Ahhh! *squeee* yassss, Keep her! 

Ah Un has a good eye. mhm. 

this is too good..and a very interesting concept coming from Ah-Un's perspective. So glad Ah-Un is finally getting her limelight! 

This is great work! Can't wait to read more chapters!

I am now officially on pins and needles. I can't wait to see how their courtship unfolds from Ah-Un's perspective! Very lovely chapters with some keen insights. I love how soft the observation Ah-Un has of their beginning relationship is. Great job, VS! I can't wait to read more!

I love how you're showing correlations between Sesshoumaru and Kagome here with her defense of Shippou as hers. It's not really much drawn attention to in the series, but they definitely have that in common.

Ha! Ah-Un knows what's good for him even if he can't recognize it himself. Love the show of stubbornness! 

"She would keep that human girl." YES, lol. That's our Kagome right there. Love this. So sweet.

Stories from Ah-Un's perspective are always so wholesome.  And it's a chance to see a purer view at what might be.  Thank you.

I love reading this from ah-u's perspective. It's just so original!

Really great start! Can't wait to see what happens next!

I'm going to miss Chibimaru, but alas, its the way of life.

His first love? Whoooooo?!

And yes, Sesshoumaru and Rin are adorable together, a proud doggy dad and his cute puppy

Awwww it's so cute and sweet!!!! 

Great story so far, it is interesting to have it from this point of view. Hope to read more soon!

So much warm and fuzzy. This is the feel good story everyone needs this year. Thank you for writing it and coming up with this heart melting tale. 

Ha! She would be skeptical. We'd all be skeptical. This is such a sweet story VS <3

:( yes, yes, he does. Let's see what's happens....